man: pam_systemd: some typos fixed, some info added

Just some minor nits that I stumbled over when reading the man page.

diff --git a/man/pam_systemd.xml b/man/pam_systemd.xml
index 4df26a3f2bb542ed4144013f2877f387f9585211..43949af24bfc2ed1ad45d4ea93c9faa5dba2155e 100644 (file)
--- a/man/pam_systemd.xml
+++ b/man/pam_systemd.xml
@@ -72,11 +72,11 @@
                         <varname>$XDG_SESSION_ID</varname> environment
                         variable is initialized. If auditing is
                         available and
                         <varname>$XDG_SESSION_ID</varname> environment
                         variable is initialized. If auditing is
                         available and

-                        <command>pam_loginuid.so</command> run before
+                        <command>pam_loginuid.so</command> was run before

                         this module (which is highly recommended), the
                         variable is initialized from the auditing
                         session id
                         this module (which is highly recommended), the
                         variable is initialized from the auditing
                         session id

-                        (<filename>/proc/self/sessionid</filename>). Otherwise
+                        (<filename>/proc/self/sessionid</filename>). Otherwise,

                         an independent session counter is
                         used.</para></listitem>
 
                         an independent session counter is
                         used.</para></listitem>
 


@@ -84,19 +84,21 @@
                         created for the session. If this is the first
                         concurrent session of the user, an implicit
                         slice below <filename>user.slice</filename> is
                         created for the session. If this is the first
                         concurrent session of the user, an implicit
                         slice below <filename>user.slice</filename> is

-                        automatically created and the scope placed in
-                        it. In instance of the system service
-                        <filename>user@.service</filename> which runs
-                        the systemd user manager
-                        instance.</para></listitem>
+                        automatically created and the scope placed into
+                        it. An instance of the system service
+                        <filename>user@.service</filename>, which runs
+                        the systemd user manager instance, is started.
+                        </para></listitem>

                 </orderedlist>
 
                 <para>On logout, this module ensures the following:</para>
 
                 <orderedlist>
                 </orderedlist>
 
                 <para>On logout, this module ensures the following:</para>
 
                 <orderedlist>

-                        <listitem><para>If this is enabled, all
-                        processes of the session are terminated. If
-                        the last concurrent session of a user ends, his
+                        <listitem><para>If enabled in
+                        <citerefentry><refentrytitle>logind.conf</refentrytitle>
+                        <manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
+                        all processes of the session are terminated. If
+                        the last concurrent session of a user ends, their

                         user systemd instance will be terminated too,
                         and so will the user's slice
                         unit.</para></listitem>
                         user systemd instance will be terminated too,
                         and so will the user's slice
                         unit.</para></listitem>


@@ -200,7 +202,7 @@
                                 to the user login time on the
                                 machine. It is automatically created
                                 the first time a user logs in and
                                 to the user login time on the
                                 machine. It is automatically created
                                 the first time a user logs in and

-                                removed on his final logout. If a user
+                                removed on their final logout. If a user

                                 logs in twice at the same time, both
                                 sessions will see the same
                                 <varname>$XDG_RUNTIME_DIR</varname>
                                 logs in twice at the same time, both
                                 sessions will see the same
                                 <varname>$XDG_RUNTIME_DIR</varname>