More better doc

diff --git a/yarrg/web/upload b/yarrg/web/upload
index 109110bf65473a3f76b36440486df09322342508..6995b9bbfc67da82c39ca51a7fdb18405d0da93c 100755 (executable)
--- a/yarrg/web/upload
+++ b/yarrg/web/upload
@@ -76,11 +76,11 @@ YPP client.  Then press "Upload" in the JPCTB window.
 The JPCTB integration is done via fully supported Java Accessibility
 interfaces and without modifying the Puzzle Pirates client, and should
 not disturb the normal running of Puzzle Pirates.  However, please
-make sure that if your YPP client misbehaves in any way, you try
-running it in the vanilla way without JPCTB integration before asking
-for help.  In particular, if the JPCTB startup method does not work,
-but the vanilla client startup method does, report the problem to us,
-not to Three Rings.
+make sure that if your YPP client misbehaves at all, you try running
+it in the vanilla way (without JPCTB integration) before asking for
+help.  In particular, if the JPCTB startup does not work, but the
+ordinary Puzzle Pirates startup does, report the problem to us, not to
+Three Rings.
 
 <h3>Installing and running on Linux</h3>