Better doc

diff --git a/yarrg/web/upload b/yarrg/web/upload
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@@ -60,14 +60,16 @@ replace both the <a href="scraper">"yarrg"</a> and "PPAOCR" screenscrapers.
 First you must install YARRG JPCTB, following the instructions for
 your operating system, below.  This will not modify your Puzzle
 Pirates installation.  Instead, it provides you with a new way to run
-Puzzle Pirates which has an additional YARRG/PCTB Upload function.
+Puzzle Pirates which integrates it with JPCTB to provides a YARRG/PCTB
+Upload facility.
 
 <p>
 
 To upload data, run the Puzzle Pirates client with JPCTB (as detailed
-below), log in normally, and visit a commodity trading screen (at a
-market, shoppe or vessel hold).  Select "All Commodities", and hit
-"Upload".
+below).  You should see both the Puzzle Pirates window and the JPCTB
+window appear.  Log in normally, and visit a commodity trading screen
+(at a market, shoppe or vessel hold).  Select "All Commodities" in the
+YPP client.  Then press "Upload" in the JPCTB window.
 
 <p>