Patriots and Patriots

diff --git a/The_Tomb_of_the_Lost_Prince/Backgrounds.mdwn b/The_Tomb_of_the_Lost_Prince/Backgrounds.mdwn
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--- a/The_Tomb_of_the_Lost_Prince/Backgrounds.mdwn
+++ b/The_Tomb_of_the_Lost_Prince/Backgrounds.mdwn
@@ -26,18 +26,18 @@ Characters will come from either Amber or Deiga
 
 * Deiga
   - Either a patriot
-    : Patriots are people who genuinely believe in the glorious future of Deiga!
-    : x
+    : Patriots are people who genuinely believe in Deiga!
+    : They have dedicated themselves to the country, perhaps at the expense of themselves.
     : They have volunteered for this expedition.
       * What do you love about Deiga?
-      * x?
-      * x?
+      * What has it cost you?
+      * Why do you think that you were accepted for the mission?
 
   - or an, umm, "patriot"
-    : "Patriots" are in the employ of the Deigan government
-    : x
-    : You have been assigned to this venture by your handler
+    : "Patriots" are in the employ of the Deigan government.
+    : They are comfortable in this position, and loyal to their employer.
+    : They have been assigned to this venture by their handlers.
       * Officially, what do you do for the government?
+      * What do they actually value you for?
       * What have they offered you to make it worth your while?
-      * x?
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