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   Plan would be to make him a rego corpus specialist who makes illuminated pictures that take you to where (or who) is depicted and books of quality that he will sell or give to the covenant so long as worthy books are copied into them. 
 
 #### Companion - Edward Hardrada - 
-* child of Harold and Edith Swanneck (who may possibly have been an infernal plant who encouraged her husband to make stupid tactical errors). Has spent time in an infernal regio where time moves differently and thus is not 160 odd years old but has been mentored in demons. Arguably heir to the throne of England. There is an infernal prophecy that "He will die King of England, Scots and divers other lands but not until he brings them to wrack and ruin." Since he does not want to die or to bring is country to ruin, he has spent his life ever since he found this out avoiding becoming King of England. To be fair, very few people do become a King and even fewer of England. But he doesn't want to take chances so stopped being a mercenary warrior and wants to be the college Porter instead. He might settle for being the Turb Captain but wants a more innocuous title. Still few universities have quite so impressive a figure guarding their doors. 
+* child of Harold and Edith Swanneck (who may possibly have been an
+infernal plant who encouraged her husband to make stupid tactical
+errors). 
+
+  Has spent time in an infernal regio where time moves differently and
+  thus is not 160 odd years old but has been mentored in demons. 
+  
+  Arguably heir to the throne of England. There is an infernal
+  prophecy that "He will die King of England, Scots and divers other
+  lands but not until he brings them to wrack and ruin." Since he does
+  not want to die or to bring is country to ruin, he has spent his
+  life ever since he found this out avoiding becoming King of
+  England. 
+  
+  To be fair, very few people do become a King and even fewer of
+  England. But he doesn't want to take chances so stopped being a
+  mercenary warrior and wants to be the college Porter instead. He
+  might settle for being the Turb Captain but wants a more innocuous
+  title. Still few universities have quite so impressive a figure
+  guarding their doors.  
 
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 Note to Zavier: