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doc: choose different words to improve clarity
authorJan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>
Mon, 17 Feb 2014 01:49:45 +0000 (02:49 +0100)
committerZbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>
Tue, 18 Feb 2014 00:03:07 +0000 (19:03 -0500)
I suggest the following changes to improve the way the text reads
("flows").

man/crypttab.xml
man/sd_bus_creds_get_pid.xml
man/sd_bus_message_get_monotonic_usec.xml

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                                 If the key slot does not match the given
                                 passphrase or key, but another would, the
                                 setup of the device will fail regardless.
-                                This implies <varname>luks</varname>. See
+                                This option implies <varname>luks</varname>. See
                                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>cryptsetup</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                                 for possible values. The default is to try
                                 all key slots in sequential order.</para></listitem>
                                 <term><varname>tcrypt-hidden</varname></term>
 
                                 <listitem><para>Use the hidden TrueCrypt volume.
-                                This implies <varname>tcrypt</varname>.</para>
+                                This option implies <varname>tcrypt</varname>.</para>
 
                                 <para>This will map the hidden volume that is
                                 inside of the volume provided in the second
                                 <term><varname>tcrypt-system</varname></term>
 
                                 <listitem><para>Use TrueCrypt in system
-                                encryption mode. This implies
+                                encryption mode. This option implies
                                 <varname>tcrypt</varname>.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
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@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
     numeric GID (group identifier).</para>
 
     <para><function>sd_bus_creds_get_comm</function> will retrieve the
-    comm field (name of the executable, as stored in
+    comm field (truncated name of the executable, as stored in
     <filename>/proc/<replaceable>pid</replaceable>/comm</filename>).
     </para>
 
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                 <para>These timestamps and the sequence number are
                 attached to each message by the kernel and cannot be
-                manipulated by the sending userspace.</para>
+                manipulated by the sender.</para>
 
                 <para>Note that these timestamps are only available on
                 some bus transports, and only after support for them