man: improve word usage and grammar in logind.conf(5)

diff --git a/man/logind.conf.xml b/man/logind.conf.xml
index 74a100eb1e99fff95ae8d1229d9e4db4c9f428a9..8ab6d729a98cb157f561ba41967d3fbf7c62a595 100644 (file)
--- a/man/logind.conf.xml
+++ b/man/logind.conf.xml
@@ -72,8 +72,8 @@
                                 <listitem><para>Takes a positive
                                 integer. Configures how many virtual
                                 terminals (VTs) to allocate by default
                                 <listitem><para>Takes a positive
                                 integer. Configures how many virtual
                                 terminals (VTs) to allocate by default

-                                that -- when switched to and
-                                previously unused --
+                                that, when switched to and are
+                                previously unused,

                                 <literal>autovt</literal> services are
                                 automatically spawned on. These
                                 services are instantiated from the
                                 <literal>autovt</literal> services are
                                 automatically spawned on. These
                                 services are instantiated from the


@@ -116,14 +116,14 @@
                                 <filename>autovt@.service</filename>
                                 activation (see above). The VT
                                 selected with this option will be
                                 <filename>autovt@.service</filename>
                                 activation (see above). The VT
                                 selected with this option will be

-                                marked busy unconditionally so that no
+                                marked busy unconditionally, so that no

                                 other subsystem will allocate it. This
                                 functionality is useful to ensure that
                                 other subsystem will allocate it. This
                                 functionality is useful to ensure that

-                                regardless how many VTs are allocated
+                                regardless of how many VTs are allocated

                                 by other subsystems, one login
                                 <literal>getty</literal> is always
                                 by other subsystems, one login
                                 <literal>getty</literal> is always

-                                available. Defaults to 6 (with other
-                                words: there will always be a
+                                available. Defaults to 6 (in other
+                                words, there will always be a

                                 <literal>getty</literal> available on
                                 Alt-F6.). When set to 0, VT
                                 reservation is
                                 <literal>getty</literal> available on
                                 Alt-F6.). When set to 0, VT
                                 reservation is


@@ -161,11 +161,11 @@
                                 user sessions correctly report the
                                 idle status to the system. The system
                                 will execute the action after all
                                 user sessions correctly report the
                                 idle status to the system. The system
                                 will execute the action after all

-                                sessions reported that they are idle,
-                                and no idle inhibitor lock is active,
-                                and subsequently the time configured
+                                sessions report that they are idle,
+                                no idle inhibitor lock is active,
+                                and subsequently, the time configured

                                 with <varname>IdleActionSec=</varname>
                                 with <varname>IdleActionSec=</varname>

-                                (see below) has passed.</para>
+                                (see below) has expired.</para>

                                 </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
                                 </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 


@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@
                                 killed. <varname>KillExcludeUsers=</varname>
                                 defaults to <literal>root</literal>
                                 and takes precedence over
                                 killed. <varname>KillExcludeUsers=</varname>
                                 defaults to <literal>root</literal>
                                 and takes precedence over

-                                <varname>KillOnlyUsers=</varname>
+                                <varname>KillOnlyUsers=</varname>,

                                 which defaults to the empty list.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
                                 which defaults to the empty list.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 


@@ -221,8 +221,9 @@
                                 <varname>Controllers=</varname> and be
                                 reset to the root control group in all
                                 hierarchies listed in
                                 <varname>Controllers=</varname> and be
                                 reset to the root control group in all
                                 hierarchies listed in

-                                <varname>ResetControllers=</varname>. <varname>Controllers=</varname>
-                                defaults to the empty list,
+                                <varname>ResetControllers=</varname>.
+                                <varname>Controllers=</varname>
+                                defaults to the empty list.

                                 <varname>ResetControllers=</varname>
                                 defaults to
                                 <literal>cpu</literal>. Note that for
                                 <varname>ResetControllers=</varname>
                                 defaults to
                                 <literal>cpu</literal>. Note that for


@@ -243,8 +244,8 @@
                                 time a system shutdown or sleep
                                 request is delayed due to an inhibitor
                                 lock of type <literal>delay</literal>
                                 time a system shutdown or sleep
                                 request is delayed due to an inhibitor
                                 lock of type <literal>delay</literal>

-                                being active -- before it is ignored
-                                and the operation executed
+                                being active before the inhibitor is
+                                ignored and the operation executes

                                 anyway. Defaults to
                                 5s.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
                                 anyway. Defaults to
                                 5s.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>


@@ -311,7 +312,7 @@
                                 <varname>SuspendKeyIgnoreInhibited=</varname>
                                 and
                                 <varname>HibernateKeyIgnoreInhibited=</varname>
                                 <varname>SuspendKeyIgnoreInhibited=</varname>
                                 and
                                 <varname>HibernateKeyIgnoreInhibited=</varname>

-                                defaults to <literal>off</literal>,
+                                default to <literal>off</literal>.

                                 <varname>LidSwitchIgnoreInhibited=</varname>
                                 defaults to
                                 <literal>yes</literal>. This means
                                 <varname>LidSwitchIgnoreInhibited=</varname>
                                 defaults to
                                 <literal>yes</literal>. This means