TODO: update

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@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@ CHANGES WITH 198:
           will load all these snippets and apply them on top of the
           main unit configuration file, possibly extending or
           overriding its settings. Using these drop-in snippets is
           will load all these snippets and apply them on top of the
           main unit configuration file, possibly extending or
           overriding its settings. Using these drop-in snippets is

-          generally nicer than the two earler options for changing
-          unit files locally: copying the files form
+          generally nicer than the two earlier options for changing
+          unit files locally: copying the files from

           /usr/lib/systemd/system/ to /etc/systemd/system/ and editing
           them there; or creating a new file in /etc/systemd/system/
           that incorporates the original one via ".include". Drop-in
           /usr/lib/systemd/system/ to /etc/systemd/system/ and editing
           them there; or creating a new file in /etc/systemd/system/
           that incorporates the original one via ".include". Drop-in


@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 198:
         * systemctl gained a new "list-dependencies" command for
           listing the dependencies of a unit recursively.
 
         * systemctl gained a new "list-dependencies" command for
           listing the dependencies of a unit recursively.
 

-        * Inhibitors are now honoured and listed by "systemctl
+        * Inhibitors are now honored and listed by "systemctl

           suspend", "systemctl poweroff" (and similar) too, not only
           GNOME. These commands will also list active sessions by
           other users.
           suspend", "systemctl poweroff" (and similar) too, not only
           GNOME. These commands will also list active sessions by
           other users.


@@ -70,9 +70,9 @@ CHANGES WITH 198:
           are now ignored, since systemd does not support early-boot
           LSB init scripts anymore, and these facilities are implied
           anyway for normal services. syslog.target has also been
           are now ignored, since systemd does not support early-boot
           LSB init scripts anymore, and these facilities are implied
           anyway for normal services. syslog.target has also been

-          removed hence.
+          removed.

 
 

-        * There ar new bus calls on PID1's Manager object for
+        * There are new bus calls on PID1's Manager object for

           canceling jobs, and removing snapshot units. Previously,
           both calls were only available on the Job and Snapshot
           objects themselves.
           canceling jobs, and removing snapshot units. Previously,
           both calls were only available on the Job and Snapshot
           objects themselves.


@@ -103,8 +103,8 @@ CHANGES WITH 198:
           bind mount specific directories from the host into the
           container.
 
           bind mount specific directories from the host into the
           container.
 

-        * nspawn will not mount its own devpts file system instance
-          into the container, in order not to leaker pty devices from
+        * nspawn will now mount its own devpts file system instance
+          into the container, in order not to leake pty devices from

           the host into the container.
 
         * systemd will now read the firmware boot time performance
           the host into the container.
 
         * systemd will now read the firmware boot time performance


@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 198:
           this, and take it into account for boot performance analysis
           via "systemd-analyze". This is currently supported only in
           conjunction with Gummiboot, but could be supported by other
           this, and take it into account for boot performance analysis
           via "systemd-analyze". This is currently supported only in
           conjunction with Gummiboot, but could be supported by other

-          boot loaders too. For details, see:
+          boot loaders too. For details see:

 
           http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/systemd/BootLoaderInterface
 
 
           http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/systemd/BootLoaderInterface
 


@@ -129,8 +129,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 198:
         * "systemctl unlock-sessions" has been added, that allows
           unlocking the screens of all user sessions at once, similar
           how "systemctl lock-sessions" already locked all users
         * "systemctl unlock-sessions" has been added, that allows
           unlocking the screens of all user sessions at once, similar
           how "systemctl lock-sessions" already locked all users

-          sessions. This is backed by a new D-Bus call
-          UnlockSessions().
+          sessions. This is backed by a new D-Bus call UnlockSessions().

 
         * "loginctl seat-status" will now show the master device of a
           seat. (i.e. the device of a seat that needs to be around for
 
         * "loginctl seat-status" will now show the master device of a
           seat. (i.e. the device of a seat that needs to be around for


@@ -141,7 +140,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 198:
           configuration of files and directories (with wildcards) that
           shall be excluded from automatic cleanup ("aging").
 
           configuration of files and directories (with wildcards) that
           shall be excluded from automatic cleanup ("aging").
 

-        * udev permission rules are now only applied for "add" rules,
+        * udev permission rules are now only applied for "add" events,

           no longer for "change" events.
 
         * The log messages for lid events and power/sleep keypresses
           no longer for "change" events.
 
         * The log messages for lid events and power/sleep keypresses


@@ -153,8 +152,8 @@ CHANGES WITH 198:
         * udevadm hwdb gained a new --root= parameter to change the
           root directory to operate relative to.
 
         * udevadm hwdb gained a new --root= parameter to change the
           root directory to operate relative to.
 

-        * logind will now issue a sync() request to the kernel early
-          at shutdown, so that dirty buffers are flushed to disk early
+        * logind will now issue a background sync() request to the kernel
+          early at shutdown, so that dirty buffers are flushed to disk early

           instead of at the last moment, in order to optimize shutdown
           times a little.
 
           instead of at the last moment, in order to optimize shutdown
           times a little.
 


@@ -238,7 +237,8 @@ CHANGES WITH 198:
 
         * systemd-detect-virt will now also detect xen PVs
 
 
         * systemd-detect-virt will now also detect xen PVs
 

-        * The pstore file system is now mounted by default, if it is available.
+        * The pstore file system is now mounted by default, if it is
+          available.

 
         Contributions from: Adel Gadllah, Aleksander Morgado, Auke
         Kok, Ayan George, Bastien Nocera, Colin Walters, Daniel Buch,
 
         Contributions from: Adel Gadllah, Aleksander Morgado, Auke
         Kok, Ayan George, Bastien Nocera, Colin Walters, Daniel Buch,