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diff --git a/new-maintainer.dbk b/new-maintainer.dbk
index f7af69b01df931a358ed7d9f0809df234607ffa3..eac77378ffdfaa445541dff7ea575d22f3b7e5b9 100644 (file)
--- a/new-maintainer.dbk
+++ b/new-maintainer.dbk
@@ -77,12 +77,7 @@ In addition, if you have some packages ready for inclusion in Debian, but are
 waiting for your new maintainer application to go through, you might be able
 find a sponsor to upload your package for you.  Sponsors are people who are
 official Debian Developers, and who are willing to criticize and upload your
 waiting for your new maintainer application to go through, you might be able
 find a sponsor to upload your package for you.  Sponsors are people who are
 official Debian Developers, and who are willing to criticize and upload your

-packages for you.
-<!-- FIXME - out of order
-Those who are seeking a
-sponsor can request one at <ulink url="http://www.internatif.org/bortzmeyer/debian/sponsor/"></ulink>.
--->
-Please read the unofficial debian-mentors FAQ at <ulink
+packages for you. Please read the debian-mentors FAQ at <ulink

 url="&url-mentors;"></ulink> first.
 </para>
 <para>
 url="&url-mentors;"></ulink> first.
 </para>
 <para>


@@ -154,8 +149,9 @@ OpenPGP is an open standard based on <ulink
 url="&url-rfc2440;">RFC 2440</ulink>.
 </para>
 <para>
 url="&url-rfc2440;">RFC 2440</ulink>.
 </para>
 <para>

-You need a version 4 key for use in Debian Development.  Your key length must
-be at least 1024 bits; there is no reason to use a smaller key, and doing so
+You need a version 4 key for use in Debian Development. <ulink
+url="http://lists.debian.org/20090520092534.GG22906@earth.li">Your key length must
+be greater than 1024 bits</ulink>; there is no reason to use a smaller key, and doing so

 would be much less secure.<footnote><para> Version 4 keys are keys conforming
 to the OpenPGP standard as defined in RFC 2440.  Version 4 is the key type that
 has always been created when using GnuPG.  PGP versions since 5.x also could
 would be much less secure.<footnote><para> Version 4 keys are keys conforming
 to the OpenPGP standard as defined in RFC 2440.  Version 4 is the key type that
 has always been created when using GnuPG.  PGP versions since 5.x also could