From: Shadow <Shadow@web>
Date: Sat, 18 Jul 2015 17:46:18 +0000 (+0100)
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diff --git a/The_Golden_Circle.mdwn b/The_Golden_Circle.mdwn
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 *Queen Moire is dead, and Queen Meinwen (Martin's daughter) is to be crowned Queen of Rebma. You have been looking forward to the coronation for weeks - it will be the social event of the decade, and everyone who is anyone will be there.*<br />
 *Except, it seems, you.*<br />
-*Instead, you are being sent off on an errand that isn't important enough for anyone more senior to be saddled with...*
+*Instead of attending the coronation, you are being sent off on an errand that isn't important enough for anyone more senior to be saddled with...*
 
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