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[PlayersGuide.git] / The_Tomb_of_the_Lost_Prince / Backgrounds.mdwn

diff --git a/The_Tomb_of_the_Lost_Prince/Backgrounds.mdwn b/The_Tomb_of_the_Lost_Prince/Backgrounds.mdwn
index 8e8bdf42371364e8c6c389b449894fe97a97d93d..10aa25437e3422b3247ca70988359e5eda6a34f2 100644 (file)
--- a/The_Tomb_of_the_Lost_Prince/Backgrounds.mdwn
+++ b/The_Tomb_of_the_Lost_Prince/Backgrounds.mdwn
@@ -5,13 +5,15 @@
 
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-Characters will come from either Amber or Deiga
+Characters will come from either Amber or Deiga.  About half the
+players will need to be in each group, so please let us know which of
+the below you'd be interested in, or if you'd like us to pick one for you.
 
 <br>
 Characters from Amber will be either a war orphan or a war veteran.
 
 * #### Orphans: ####
-  * Orphans should be adults who were orphaned during the war 10 years ago.
+  * Orphans should be adults who were orphaned as children during the war 10 years ago.
   * They should have no surviving parents (although they might not have lost both parents during the war).
   * They have been recruited for this venture by a mysterious stranger.
       * What did your parent or parents do in the war?
@@ -29,7 +31,7 @@ Characters from Amber will be either a war orphan or a war veteran.
 <br>
 Characters from Deiga will be either a patriot or an, umm, "patriot"
 
-* #### Patriot: ####
+* #### Patriots: ####
   * Patriots are people who genuinely believe in Deiga.
   * They have dedicated themselves to the country, perhaps at the expense of themselves.
   * They have volunteered for this expedition.
@@ -37,11 +39,13 @@ Characters from Deiga will be either a patriot or an, umm, "patriot"
       * What has it cost you?
       * Why do you think that you were accepted for the expedition?
 
-* #### "Patriot": ####
+* #### "Patriots": ####
   * "Patriots" are in the employ of the Deigan government.
   * They are comfortable in this position, and loyal to their employer.
   * They have been assigned to this expedition by their handlers.
       * Officially, what do you do for the government?
       * What do they actually value you for?
       * What have they offered you to make it worth your while?
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