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@@ -83,19 +83,19 @@ From Mathieus, Winter 1222
 
 > To Johannes Roth, Quaesitor of Stonehenge,
 > 
->  I think the primary reason that many young Mages succeed in
+>  I think the primary reason that many young Mages do not succeed in
 > marrying is that they get distracted by their Arcane and Academic
 > studies to the extent that they ignore this other goal.
 >
 >  If you are wishing to court a daughter of the French court then I
 > would suggest that you visit here for a season whilst the King is in
-> residence in the Louvre and I can arrance for you to be invited to
+> residence in the Louvre and I can arrange for you to be invited to
 > major court functions.  Alternatively the Duchy of Burgundy hosts
 > the most cultured court in Europe.
 >
 >  Alternatively were you to wish to meet eligible Magae then I could
-> be pursuaded to organise, say, a week of social events here in
-> Paris; culmunating in a Ball of course.  There are a number of
+> be persuaded to organise, say, a week of social events here in
+> Paris; culminating in a Ball of course.  There are a number of
 > recently gauntleted Magi and older apprentices whom I would invite.
 >
 > Yours,
@@ -103,3 +103,26 @@ From Mathieus, Winter 1222
 > Mathieus.
 >
 > *[Attached is a short summary of some eligible Magae]*
+
+-------------------------------
+
+From Johannes, Winter 1222
+
+> To the respected Mathieus of House Jerbiton, Johannes Roth sends greetings 
+> and thanks:
+>
+> I can certainly understand that the pressures of time are an obstacle; between
+> mundane and magical studies it often feels like there will never be enough time
+> in the day!
+>
+> I would be very interested in meeting several of the young Magae you mention,
+> and a week of social events in Paris would be a most welcome break from my
+> usual regime of study. If it were not too much trouble for you to arrange it,
+> I would be delighted to attend such an event, and I pray you tell me what I 
+> might do to facilitate it.
+>
+>
+> Yours in gratitude,
+>
+> Johannes ex Guernicus
+