From: Jan Engelhardt Date: Sat, 13 Jul 2013 08:51:35 +0000 (+0200) Subject: man: wording and grammar update X-Git-Tag: v206~112 X-Git-Url: https://www.chiark.greenend.org.uk/ucgi/~ianmdlvl/git?p=elogind.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=6a75304e41e4487d840057a0e5f9972e141e4540 man: wording and grammar update --- diff --git a/man/systemd.cgroup.xml b/man/systemd.cgroup.xml index 504c9685a..e31faf522 100644 --- a/man/systemd.cgroup.xml +++ b/man/systemd.cgroup.xml @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see . and systemd.swap5 for more information on the specific unit configuration files. The - execution specific configuration options are configured in the + execution-specific configuration options are configured in the [Slice], [Scope], [Service], [Socket], [Mount], or [Swap] sections, depending on the unit type. @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see . CPUAccounting= - Turn on the CPU usage accounting for this + Turn on CPU usage accounting for this unit. @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see . BlockIOAccounting= - Turn on the Block IO bandwidth accounting + Turn on Block IO bandwidth accounting for this unit. @@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see . MemoryAccounting= - Turn on the process and kernel memory + Turn on process and kernel memory accounting for this unit. @@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see . the processes executed. Takes an integer value. This controls the cpu.shares control group attribute, which defaults to 1024. For details about this - control group attribute see sched-design-CFS.txt. Implies CPUAccounting=true. @@ -145,12 +145,12 @@ along with systemd; If not, see . detects memory contention, memory reclaim will be performed until the memory usage is within the "soft" limit. Takes a memory size in bytes. If the value is suffixed with K, M, G - or T the specified memory size is parsed as Kilobytes, + or T, the specified memory size is parsed as Kilobytes, Megabytes, Gigabytes, or Terabytes (with the base 1024), respectively. This controls the memory.limit_in_bytes and memory.soft_limit_in_bytes control group - attributes. For details about these control group attributes + attributes. For details about these control group attributes, see memory.txt. @@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see . blkio.weight control group attribute, which defaults to 1000. For details about - this control group attribute see + this control group attribute, see blkio-controller.txt. @@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see . blkio.weight_device control group attribute, which defaults to 1000. Use this option multiple times to set weights for multiple devices. For details about - this control group attribute see blkio-controller.txt. @@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see . specify the device specific bandwidth. The file path may be a path to a block device node, or as any other file in which case the backing block device of the file system of the file - is used. If the bandwidth is suffixed with K, M, G, or T + is used. If the bandwidth is suffixed with K, M, G, or T, the specified bandwidth is parsed as Kilobytes, Megabytes, Gigabytes, or Terabytes, respectively (Example: "/dev/disk/by-path/pci-0000:00:1f.2-scsi-0:0:0:0 5M"). This @@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see . blkio.write_bps_device control group attributes. Use this option multiple times to set bandwidth limits for multiple devices. For details about these control - group attributes see + group attributes, see blkio-controller.txt. @@ -230,11 +230,11 @@ along with systemd; If not, see . followed by a combination of r, w, m to control reading, writing, - or creating of the specific device node by the unit + or creation of the specific device node by the unit (mknod), respectively. This controls the devices.allow and devices.deny control group - attributes. For details about these control group attributes + attributes. For details about these control group attributes, see devices.txt. @@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see . - in addition allows access to standard pseudo + in addition, allows access to standard pseudo devices including /dev/null, /dev/zero, @@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see . - in addition allows access to all devices if no + in addition, allows access to all devices if no explicit DeviceAllow= is present. This is the default. diff --git a/man/systemd.exec.xml b/man/systemd.exec.xml index d299fc038..c9958340a 100644 --- a/man/systemd.exec.xml +++ b/man/systemd.exec.xml @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ Description Unit configuration files for services, sockets, - mount points, and swap devices share a subset of + mount points and swap devices share a subset of configuration options which define the execution environment of spawned processes. diff --git a/man/systemd.scope.xml b/man/systemd.scope.xml index 31f2d6f5a..6cd8c8845 100644 --- a/man/systemd.scope.xml +++ b/man/systemd.scope.xml @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see . A unit configuration file whose name ends in .scope encodes information about a unit created - by systemd to encapsulate processes launched not by systemd + by systemd to encapsulate processes not launched by systemd itself. This management is performed by creating a node in the control group tree. Processes are moved into the scope by means of the DBus API. diff --git a/man/systemd.socket.xml b/man/systemd.socket.xml index fad5c2b8c..852010bfa 100644 --- a/man/systemd.socket.xml +++ b/man/systemd.socket.xml @@ -510,7 +510,7 @@ ReusePort= Takes a boolean - value. If true allows multiple bind()s + value. If true, allows multiple bind()s to this TCP or UDP port. This controls the SO_REUSEPORT socket option. See