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man: reword sd-hibernate-resume description and add link
authorZbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>
Wed, 27 Aug 2014 01:14:11 +0000 (21:14 -0400)
committerZbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>
Wed, 27 Aug 2014 01:14:11 +0000 (21:14 -0400)
"each device" was suggesting that this service might be instantiated
multiple times. "hibernation resume" was too jargon-y.

man/systemd-hibernate-resume@.service.xml

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         <refsect1>
                 <title>Description</title>
 
-                <para><filename>systemd-hibernate-resume@.service</filename> is a
-                service that initiates hibernation resume from a device
-                containing the resume image. It is instantiated for each
-                device that is configured for resuming from.</para>
+                <para><filename>systemd-hibernate-resume@.service</filename>
+                initiates the resume from hibernation. It is
+                instantiated with the device to resume from as the
+                template argument.</para>
 
                 <para><filename>systemd-hibernate-resume</filename> only supports
-                the in-kernel hibernation implementation, known as swsusp.
+                the in-kernel hibernation implementation, known as
+                <ulink url="https://www.kernel.org/doc/Documentation/power/swsusp.txt">swsusp</ulink>.
                 Internally, it works by writing the major:minor of specified
                 device node to <filename>/sys/power/resume</filename>.</para>