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diff --git a/udev/udev.xml b/udev/udev.xml
index 3bf7ee8ec..74917e154 100644
--- a/udev/udev.xml
+++ b/udev/udev.xml
@@ -80,20 +80,20 @@
       the same name in <filename>/lib/udev/rules.d/</filename>; this can be
       used to ignore a default rules file if needed.</para>
 
-      <para>Rule files must end in <filename>.rules</filename>, other extensions
-      are ignored.</para>
+      <para>Rule files must have the extension <filename>.rules</filename>; other
+      extensions are ignored.</para>
 
-      <para>Every line in the rules file contains at least one key value pair.
-      There are two kind of keys, match and assignment keys.
+      <para>Every line in the rules file contains at least one key-value pair.
+      There are two kind of keys: match and assignment.
       If all match keys are matching against its value, the rule gets applied and the
-      assign keys get the specified value assigned.</para>
+      assignment keys get the specified value assigned.</para>
 
       <para>A matching rule may rename a network interface, add symlinks
       pointing to the device node, or run a specified program as part of
       the event handling.</para>
 
-      <para>A rule consists of a list of one or more key value pairs separated by
-      a comma. Each key has a distinct operation, depending on the used operator. Valid
+      <para>A rule consists of a comma-separated list of one or more key-value pairs.
+      Each key has a distinct operation, depending on the used operator. Valid
       operators are:</para>
       <variablelist>
         <varlistentry>
@@ -128,8 +128,7 @@
         <varlistentry>
           <term><option>:=</option></term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Assign  a  value  to  a key finally; disallow any later changes,
-            which may be used to prevent changes by any later rules.</para>
+            <para>Assign  a  value  to  a key finally; disallow any later changes.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
       </variablelist>
@@ -189,7 +188,7 @@
         <varlistentry>
           <term><option>DRIVER</option></term>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Match the driver name of the event device. Only set for devices
+            <para>Match the driver name of the event device. Only set this key for devices
             which are bound to a driver at the time the event is generated.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
@@ -508,7 +507,7 @@
               <varlistentry>
                 <term><option>watch</option></term>
                 <listitem>
-                  <para>Watch the device node with inotify, when closed after being opened for
+                  <para>Watch the device node with inotify; when closed after being opened for
                   writing, a change uevent is synthesised.</para>
                 </listitem>
               </varlistentry>