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                 which configure resource control settings for the
                 processes of the socket.</para>
 
                 which configure resource control settings for the
                 processes of the socket.</para>
 
-                <para>For each socket file a matching service file
+                <para>For each socket file, a matching service file
                 must exist, describing the service to start on
                 incoming traffic on the socket (see
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.service</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 must exist, describing the service to start on
                 incoming traffic on the socket (see
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.service</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 boot or late system shutdown should disable this
                 option.</para>
 
                 boot or late system shutdown should disable this
                 option.</para>
 
-               <para>Socket units will have a
-               <varname>Before=</varname> dependency on the service
-               which they trigger added implicitly. No implicit
-               <varname>WantedBy=</varname> or
-               <varname>RequiredBy=</varname> dependency from the
-               socket to the service is added. This means that the
-               service may be started without the socket, in which
-               case it must be able to open sockets by itself. To
-               prevent this, an explicit <varname>Requires=</varname>
-               dependency may be added.</para>
+                <para>Socket units will have a
+                <varname>Before=</varname> dependency on the service
+                which they trigger added implicitly. No implicit
+                <varname>WantedBy=</varname> or
+                <varname>RequiredBy=</varname> dependency from the
+                socket to the service is added. This means that the
+                service may be started without the socket, in which
+                case it must be able to open sockets by itself. To
+                prevent this, an explicit <varname>Requires=</varname>
+                dependency may be added.</para>
 
                 <para>Socket units may be used to implement on-demand
                 starting of services, as well as parallelized starting
 
                 <para>Socket units may be used to implement on-demand
                 starting of services, as well as parallelized starting
                                 before the interface it is configured
                                 on is up and running, and even
                                 regardless of whether it will be up and
                                 before the interface it is configured
                                 on is up and running, and even
                                 regardless of whether it will be up and
-                                running at any point. To deal with this
+                                running at any point. To deal with this,
                                 it is recommended to set the
                                 <varname>FreeBind=</varname> option
                                 described below.</para></listitem>
                                 it is recommended to set the
                                 <varname>FreeBind=</varname> option
                                 described below.</para></listitem>
                                 <varname>Accept=no</varname>. It
                                 defaults to the service that bears the
                                 same name as the socket (with the
                                 <varname>Accept=no</varname>. It
                                 defaults to the service that bears the
                                 same name as the socket (with the
-                                suffix replaced). In most cases it
+                                suffix replaced). In most cases, it
                                 should not be necessary to use this
                                 option.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
                                 should not be necessary to use this
                                 option.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>