man: improvements to comma placement

[elogind.git] / man / systemd.service.xml

diff --git a/man/systemd.service.xml b/man/systemd.service.xml
index 103c495fbed5dacc3bbbc338d0cd4a52b380a4d4..8e6c20550dbe49f7bfc0c9525e7c266b2c7e4698 100644 (file)
--- a/man/systemd.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.service.xml
@@ -321,11 +321,7 @@
                                 (these semicolons must be passed as
                                 separate words). Alternatively, this
                                 directive may be specified more than
-                                once with the same effect. However,
-                                the latter syntax is not recommended
-                                for compatibility with parsers
-                                suitable for XDG
-                                <filename>.desktop</filename> files.
+                                once with the same effect.
                                 Lone semicolons may be escaped as
                                 <literal>\;</literal>. If the empty
                                 string is assigned to this option, the
@@ -445,7 +441,7 @@
                                 <literal>one</literal> and
                                 <literal>two two</literal>,
                                 respectively. Since two commands are
-                                specified
+                                specified,
                                 <varname>Type=oneshot</varname> must
                                 be used.</para>
 
@@ -716,7 +712,7 @@ ExecStart=/bin/echo $ONE $TWO ${TWO}
                                 timeout for the service expires.
                                 If set to
                                 <option>always</option>, the service
-                                will be restarted regardless whether
+                                will be restarted regardless of whether
                                 it exited cleanly or not, got
                                 terminated abnormally by a signal or
                                 hit a timeout.</para>