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man: grammar and wording improvements
[elogind.git] / man / systemd.service.xml
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                                 <programlisting>ExecStart=/bin/sh -c 'dmesg | tac'
                                 </programlisting>
 
-                                <para>Only select environment variables
+                                <para>Only select environment variables that
                                 are set for executed commands. See
                                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.exec</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>.
                                 </para>
                                 <literal>one</literal> and
                                 <literal>two two</literal>,
                                 respectively. Since two commands are
-                                specified
+                                specified,
                                 <varname>Type=oneshot</varname> must
                                 be used.</para>
 
@@ -712,7 +712,7 @@ ExecStart=/bin/echo $ONE $TWO ${TWO}
                                 timeout for the service expires.
                                 If set to
                                 <option>always</option>, the service
-                                will be restarted regardless whether
+                                will be restarted regardless of whether
                                 it exited cleanly or not, got
                                 terminated abnormally by a signal or
                                 hit a timeout.</para>