man: more grammar improvements

[elogind.git] / man / crypttab.xml

diff --git a/man/crypttab.xml b/man/crypttab.xml
index 1063b46e06c452a8220eff57579fa691731f4af5..e52b7e6015b29b92abde16ddc694b5f54861cb5c 100644 (file)
--- a/man/crypttab.xml
+++ b/man/crypttab.xml
@@ -83,15 +83,15 @@
                 underlying block device, or a specification of a block
                 device via <literal>UUID=</literal> followed by the
                 UUID.  If the block device contains a LUKS signature,
                 underlying block device, or a specification of a block
                 device via <literal>UUID=</literal> followed by the
                 UUID.  If the block device contains a LUKS signature,

-                it is opened as a LUKS encrypted partition; otherwise
+                it is opened as a LUKS encrypted partition; otherwise,

                 it is assumed to be a raw dm-crypt partition.</para>
 
                 <para>The third field specifies the encryption
                 password.  If the field is not present or the password
                 is set to none, the password has to be manually
                 it is assumed to be a raw dm-crypt partition.</para>
 
                 <para>The third field specifies the encryption
                 password.  If the field is not present or the password
                 is set to none, the password has to be manually

-                entered during system boot.  Otherwise the field is
+                entered during system boot.  Otherwise, the field is

                 interpreted as a path to a file containing the
                 interpreted as a path to a file containing the

-                encryption password.  For swap encryption
+                encryption password.  For swap encryption,

                 <filename>/dev/urandom</filename> or the hardware
                 device <filename>/dev/hw_random</filename> can be used
                 as the password file; using
                 <filename>/dev/urandom</filename> or the hardware
                 device <filename>/dev/hw_random</filename> can be used
                 as the password file; using


@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@
                                 <listitem><para>The system will not
                                 wait for the device to show up and be
                                 unlocked at boot, and not fail the
                                 <listitem><para>The system will not
                                 wait for the device to show up and be
                                 unlocked at boot, and not fail the

-                                boot if it doesn't show
+                                boot if it does not show

                                 up.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
                                 up.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 


@@ -282,7 +282,7 @@
                 </variablelist>
 
                 <para>At early boot and when the system manager
                 </variablelist>
 
                 <para>At early boot and when the system manager

-                configuration is reloaded this file is translated into
+                configuration is reloaded, this file is translated into

                 native systemd units
                 by <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd-cryptsetup-generator</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
         </refsect1>
                 native systemd units
                 by <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd-cryptsetup-generator</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
         </refsect1>