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diff --git a/dgit-sponsorship.7.pod b/dgit-sponsorship.7.pod
index 40410e14..3b8c3a8b 100644
--- a/dgit-sponsorship.7.pod
+++ b/dgit-sponsorship.7.pod
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ dgit-sponsorship - tutorial for Debian upload sponsorship, using git
 
 This tutorial describes how a Debian sponsored contributor
 and
-their sponsoring DD (or DM)
+a sponsoring DD (or DM)
 can collaborate and publish using git.
 
 The sponsor must to be intending to use dgit for the upload.
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ options to dgit, or
 C<dgit --gbp> or C<dgit --dpm>,
 you must specify that in your handoff email - see below.
 
-=head1 GIT+ORIGS BASED HANDOFF
+=head2 git+origs based handoff
 
 The elements of the handoff consists of:
 
@@ -89,8 +89,12 @@ constraints about upload timing, etc.
 
 If the handoff is done by email,
 the elements above should be a in a single, signed, message.
+This could be an RFS submission
+against the sponsorship-requests pseudo-package.
 
-=head2 git branch
+=head3 git branch
+
+=over 4
 
 The sponsee should push their HEAD as a git branch
 to any suitable git server.
@@ -102,11 +106,15 @@ and on the server, do not matter.
 
 The sponsee should not make a C<debian/>I<version> tag.
 
-Instead, the sponsor should include the
+Instead, the sponsee should include the
 git commit id of their HEAD
 in their handover email.
 
-=head2 orig tarballs
+=back
+
+=head3 orig tarballs
+
+=over 4
 
 If there are any .origs that are not in the archive already,
 the sponsor will need them as part of the upload.
@@ -132,7 +140,11 @@ if they are small.
 The sponsee should quote sha256sums of the .origs in their
 handoff email.
 
-=head2 quilt options
+=back
+
+=head3 quilt options
+
+=over 4
 
 Some workflows involve git branches which are not natively
 dgit-compatible.
@@ -162,7 +174,7 @@ This part is addressed to the sponsor:
 
 You should check the signature on the email.
 
-Use C<git fetch> to fetch the git branch
+Use C<git fetch> or C<git clone> to obtain the git branch
 prepared by your sponsee,
 and obtain any .origs mentioned by the sponsee
 (to extract .origs committed with pristine-tar,