X-Git-Url: https://www.chiark.greenend.org.uk/ucgi/~ianmdlvl/git?p=dgit-junk.git;a=blobdiff_plain;f=manpage-request;h=e904810c96d8e432d17f1cbd6740c3d363446fcd;hp=00b054312627c7d6c74ebefb59b31c8a7b2d5982;hb=2fd1e82cddfa9547983467263e56232f2e182c41;hpb=c34f18df111a1b59e7cadb60b7415889232398dd

diff --git a/manpage-request b/manpage-request
index 00b0543..e904810 100644
--- a/manpage-request
+++ b/manpage-request
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ central dgit server.
 
 The tree contents (in git terminology) of that branch correspond
 precisely to the contents of the corresponding source package.  (In
-more detail: dgit needs a `patches-applied packaging branch without
+more detail: dgit records a `patches-applied packaging branch without
 .pc directory'.)
 
 The commit graph structure of the dgit branch is primarily up to the
@@ -49,8 +49,8 @@ maintainer.  The only requirements imposed by dgit are that:
 successive uploads are fast forwards; and, that NMUs are represented
 by linear commit(s) on the tip of that branch.
 
-When a maintainer is using TOOL and dgit, it is TOOL which determines
-the commit structure, subject to the constraints above.
+When a maintainer is using dgit with TOOL, it is TOOL which determines
+the commit structure, subject to these constraints.
 
 
 3. Suggsted manpage skeleton