pretest-to-tested-repeatedly

[dgit-junk.git] / manpage-request

diff --git a/manpage-request b/manpage-request
index 00b054312627c7d6c74ebefb59b31c8a7b2d5982..e904810c96d8e432d17f1cbd6740c3d363446fcd 100644 (file)
--- a/manpage-request
+++ b/manpage-request
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ central dgit server.
 
 The tree contents (in git terminology) of that branch correspond
 precisely to the contents of the corresponding source package.  (In
 
 The tree contents (in git terminology) of that branch correspond
 precisely to the contents of the corresponding source package.  (In

-more detail: dgit needs a `patches-applied packaging branch without
+more detail: dgit records a `patches-applied packaging branch without

 .pc directory'.)
 
 The commit graph structure of the dgit branch is primarily up to the
 .pc directory'.)
 
 The commit graph structure of the dgit branch is primarily up to the


@@ -49,8 +49,8 @@ maintainer.  The only requirements imposed by dgit are that:
 successive uploads are fast forwards; and, that NMUs are represented
 by linear commit(s) on the tip of that branch.
 
 successive uploads are fast forwards; and, that NMUs are represented
 by linear commit(s) on the tip of that branch.
 

-When a maintainer is using TOOL and dgit, it is TOOL which determines
-the commit structure, subject to the constraints above.
+When a maintainer is using dgit with TOOL, it is TOOL which determines
+the commit structure, subject to these constraints.

 
 
 3. Suggsted manpage skeleton
 
 
 3. Suggsted manpage skeleton