language fixes in a paragraph

git-svn-id: svn://anonscm.debian.org/ddp/manuals/trunk/developers-reference@1723 313b444b-1b9f-4f58-a734-7bb04f332e8d

diff --git a/developers-reference.sgml b/developers-reference.sgml
index 58c6e9dbe882c1b11c6494bcab88f39773cbfa7a..5f31b2bf38898fb6ca7205a0d469abbe3b9f8492 100644 (file)
--- a/developers-reference.sgml
+++ b/developers-reference.sgml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <!entity % commondata  SYSTEM "common.ent" > %commondata;
 
   <!-- CVS revision of this document -->
-  <!entity cvs-rev "$Revision: 1.116 $">
+  <!entity cvs-rev "$Revision: 1.117 $">
   <!-- if you are translating this document, please notate the CVS
        revision of the developers reference here -->
   <!--
@@ -935,15 +935,15 @@ installing them in the Debian archive. It consists of a set of
 directories and scripts that are installed both on <tt>&ftp-master-host;</tt>
 and <tt>&non-us-host;</tt>.
        <p>
-Packages are uploaded by all the maintainers into an <file>unchecked</file>
-directory. This directory is scanned every 15 minutes by the katie script
-that verifies the integrity of the package and the cryptographic
-signature.  If the package is considered ready to be installed, it
-is moved into an <file>accepted</file> directory. If it is the first upload of
-the package then it is moved in a <file>new</file> directory waiting an
-approval of the ftpmasters. If the package contains files to be installed
-"by-hand" is is moved in the <file>byhand</file> directory waiting a manual
-installation by the ftpmasters. Otherwise, if any error has been detected,
+Packages are uploaded by all the maintainers into a directory called
+<file>unchecked</file>. This directory is scanned every 15 minutes by the katie script
+that verifies the integrity of the uploaded packages and the cryptographic
+signatures.  If the package is considered ready to be installed, it
+is moved into the <file>accepted</file> directory. If this is the first upload of
+the package, it is moved in the <file>new</file> directory, where it waits
+for an approval of the ftpmasters. If the package contains files to be installed
+"by-hand" is is moved in the <file>byhand</file> directory, where it waits
+for a manual installation by the ftpmasters. Otherwise, if any error has been detected,
 the package is refused and is moved in the <file>reject</file> directory.
        <p>
 Once the package is accepted the system sends a confirmation