better language

git-svn-id: svn://anonscm.debian.org/ddp/manuals/trunk/developers-reference@3951 313b444b-1b9f-4f58-a734-7bb04f332e8d

diff --git a/developers-reference.sgml b/developers-reference.sgml
index ad2b982e347d2bf032e44a4d253793b8121141a8..ba27836f498f73583c247e3c02d3865f17b3d51a 100644 (file)
--- a/developers-reference.sgml
+++ b/developers-reference.sgml
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
   <!ENTITY % dynamicdata  SYSTEM "dynamic.ent" > %dynamicdata;
 
   <!-- CVS revision of this document -->
-  <!ENTITY cvs-rev "$Revision: 1.304 $">
+  <!ENTITY cvs-rev "$Revision: 1.305 $">
 
   <!-- if you are translating this document, please notate the CVS
        revision of the original developer's reference in cvs-en-rev -->
@@ -1646,9 +1646,9 @@ When closing security bugs include CVE numbers as well as the
 "Closes: #nnnnn".
 This is useful for the security team to track vulnerabilities.
 If an upload is made to fix the bug before the advisory ID is known,
-it is encouraged to modify the historical changelog entry with the next upload;
-please include even in that case all pointers you have to your first
-changelog entry.
+it is encouraged to modify the historical changelog entry with the next upload.
+Even in this case, please include all available pointers to background
+information in the original changelog entry.
 
        <p>
 There are a number of reasons why we ask maintainers to announce their