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diff --git a/man/systemd.exec.xml b/man/systemd.exec.xml
index 11ad7f660..3f27d13c3 100644
--- a/man/systemd.exec.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.exec.xml
@@ -340,9 +340,14 @@
 
                                 <para>The files listed with this
                                 directive will be read shortly before
-                                the process is executed. Settings from
-                                these files override settings made
-                                with
+                                the process is executed (more
+                                specifically, after all
+                                processes from a previous unit state
+                                terminated. This means you can
+                                generate these files in one unit
+                                state, and read it with this option in
+                                the next). Settings from these files
+                                override settings made with
                                 <varname>Environment=</varname>. If
                                 the same variable is set twice from
                                 these files, the files will be read in
@@ -840,7 +845,7 @@
                                 processes via
                                 <filename>/tmp</filename> or
                                 <filename>/var/tmp</filename>
-                                impossible. If this is enabled all
+                                impossible. If this is enabled, all
                                 temporary files created by a service
                                 in these directories will be removed
                                 after the service is stopped. Defaults
@@ -1017,7 +1022,7 @@
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><varname>AppArmorProfile=</varname></term>
 
-                                <listitem><para>Take a profile name as argument.
+                                <listitem><para>Takes a profile name as argument.
                                 The process executed by the unit will switch to
                                 this profile when started. Profiles must already
                                 be loaded in the kernel, or the unit will fail.
@@ -1199,22 +1204,22 @@
                                 (which creates connected AF_UNIX
                                 sockets only) are unaffected. Note
                                 that this option has no effect on
-                                32bit x86 and is ignored (but works
+                                32-bit x86 and is ignored (but works
                                 correctly on x86-64). If running in user
                                 mode and this option is used,
                                 <varname>NoNewPrivileges=yes</varname>
-                                is implied. By default no
+                                is implied. By default, no
                                 restriction applies, all address
                                 families are accessible to
                                 processes. If assigned the empty
-                                string any previous list changes are
+                                string, any previous list changes are
                                 undone.</para>
 
                                 <para>Use this option to limit
                                 exposure of processes to remote
                                 systems, in particular via exotic
                                 network protocols. Note that in most
-                                cases the local
+                                cases, the local
                                 <constant>AF_UNIX</constant> address
                                 family should be included in the
                                 configured whitelist as it is
@@ -1234,8 +1239,8 @@
                                 processes. Takes one of
                                 <constant>x86</constant> and
                                 <constant>x86-64</constant>. This is
-                                useful when running 32bit services on
-                                a 64bit host system. If not specified
+                                useful when running 32-bit services on
+                                a 64-bit host system. If not specified,
                                 the personality is left unmodified and
                                 thus reflects the personality of the
                                 host system's
@@ -1247,14 +1252,14 @@
                                 <term><varname>RuntimeDirectoryMode=</varname></term>
 
                                 <listitem><para>Takes a list of
-                                directory names. If set one or more
+                                directory names. If set, one or more
                                 directories by the specified names
                                 will be created below
                                 <filename>/run</filename> (for system
                                 services) or below
                                 <varname>$XDG_RUNTIME_DIR</varname>
                                 (for user services) when the unit is
-                                started and removed when the unit is
+                                started, and removed when the unit is
                                 stopped. The directories will have the
                                 access mode specified in
                                 <varname>RuntimeDirectoryMode=</varname>,
@@ -1270,7 +1275,7 @@
                                 <literal>/</literal>, i.e. must refer
                                 to simple directories to create or
                                 remove. This is particularly useful
-                                for unpriviliges daemons that cannot
+                                for unprivileged daemons that cannot
                                 create runtime directories in
                                 <filename>/run</filename> due to lack
                                 of privileges, and to make sure the
@@ -1422,7 +1427,7 @@
                 <varname>systemd.setenv=</varname> (see
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>). Additional
                 variables may also be set through PAM,
-                c.f. <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pam_env</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
+                cf. <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pam_env</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>