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diff --git a/man/systemd-readahead-replay.service.xml b/man/systemd-readahead-replay.service.xml
index a00f7e589..806d46093 100644
--- a/man/systemd-readahead-replay.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-readahead-replay.service.xml
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
time. systemd-readahead-replay.service
is a service that replays this access data collected
at the subsequent boot. Since disks tend to be
- magnitudes slower than RAM this is intended to improve
+ magnitudes slower than RAM, this is intended to improve
boot speeds by pre-loading early at boot all data on
disk that is known to be read for the complete boot
process.
@@ -80,9 +80,9 @@
systemd-readahead-done.service
is executed a short while after boot completed and signals
systemd-readahead-collect.service
- to end data collection. On this signal this service
+ to end data collection. On this signal, this service
will then sort the collected disk accesses and store
- information about them disk in
+ information about them in
/.readahead.Normally, both
@@ -92,17 +92,17 @@
are activated at boot so that access patterns from the
preceding boot are replayed and new data collected
for the subsequent boot. However, on read-only media
- where the collected data cannot be stored it might
+ where the collected data cannot be stored, it might
be a good idea to disable
systemd-readahead-collect.service.On rotating media, when replaying disk accesses
- at early boot
+ at early boot,
systemd-readahead-replay.service
will order read requests by their location on disk. On
non-rotating media, they will be ordered by their
original access timestamp. If the file system supports
- it
+ it,
systemd-readahead-collect.service
will also defragment and rearrange files on disk to
optimize subsequent boot times.
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@
Maximum size of files
- (in bytes) to read ahead. Only valid
+ in bytes to read ahead. Only valid
for the collect
and replay
commands.
@@ -145,8 +145,8 @@
- Maximum time (in usec)
- to to spend collecting data. Only valid
+ Maximum time in microseconds
+ to spend collecting data. Only valid
for the collect
command.
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@
[DIRECTORY]
Collect read-ahead data on
- early boot. When terminating it will
+ early boot. When terminating, it will
write out a pack file to the indicated
directory containing the read-ahead
data.
@@ -186,9 +186,9 @@
Dumps the content of the
read-ahead pack file to the
- terminal. The output lists
- approximately for each file
- how much will be read-ahead by
+ terminal. For each file, the
+ output lists approximately how
+ much will be read ahead by
the replay
command.