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diff --git a/man/sd_watchdog_enabled.xml b/man/sd_watchdog_enabled.xml
index e42ae430e..cad92df7a 100644
--- a/man/sd_watchdog_enabled.xml
+++ b/man/sd_watchdog_enabled.xml
@@ -73,14 +73,14 @@
                 <function>sd_watchdog_enabled()</function> will unset
                 the <varname>$WATCHDOG_USEC</varname> and
                 <varname>$WATCHDOG_PID</varname> environment variables
-                before returning (regardless whether the function call
+                before returning (regardless of whether the function call
                 itself succeeded or not). Further calls to
                 <function>sd_watchdog_enabled()</function> will then
                 return with zero, but the variable is no longer
                 inherited by child processes.</para>
 
                 <para>If the <parameter>usec</parameter> parameter is
-                non-NULL <function>sd_watchdog_enabled()</function>
+                non-NULL, <function>sd_watchdog_enabled()</function>
                 will return the timeout in µs for the watchdog
                 logic. The service manager will usually terminate a
                 service when it did not get a notification message
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
                 <literal>WATCHDOG=1</literal>.</para>
 
                 <para>To enable service supervision with the watchdog
-                logic use <varname>WatchdogSec=</varname> in service
+                logic, use <varname>WatchdogSec=</varname> in service
                 files. See
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.service</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 for details.</para>
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
                 errno-style error code. If the service manager expects
                 watchdog keep-alive notification messages to be sent,
                 &gt; 0 is returned, otherwise 0 is returned. Only if
-                the return value is &gt; 0 the
+                the return value is &gt; 0, the
                 <parameter>usec</parameter> parameter is valid after
                 the call.</para>
         </refsect1>
@@ -129,10 +129,10 @@
                 variable. The call will ignore these variables if
                 <varname>$WATCHDOG_PID</varname> does containe the PID
                 of the current process, under the assumption that in
-                that case the variables were set for a different
+                that case, the variables were set for a different
                 process further up the process tree.</para>
 
-                <para>For details about the algorithm check the
+                <para>For details about the algorithm, check the
                 liberally licensed reference implementation sources:
                 <ulink url="http://cgit.freedesktop.org/systemd/systemd/plain/src/libsystemd-daemon/sd-daemon.c"/>
                 and <ulink
@@ -142,13 +142,13 @@
                 implemented in the reference implementation's
                 <filename>sd-daemon.c</filename> and
                 <filename>sd-daemon.h</filename> files. These
-                interfaces are available as shared library, which can
+                interfaces are available as a shared library, which can
                 be compiled and linked to with the
                 <constant>libsystemd-daemon</constant> <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 file. Alternatively, applications consuming these APIs
                 may copy the implementation into their source
                 tree. For more details about the reference
-                implementation see
+                implementation, see
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd-daemon</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
 
                 <para>If the reference implementation is used as