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diff --git a/man/sd_uid_get_state.xml b/man/sd_uid_get_state.xml
index ba614f932..01ad0abfc 100644
--- a/man/sd_uid_get_state.xml
+++ b/man/sd_uid_get_state.xml
@@ -57,28 +57,28 @@
                         <funcprototype>
                                 <funcdef>int <function>sd_uid_get_state</function></funcdef>
                                 <paramdef>uid_t <parameter>uid</parameter></paramdef>
-                                <paramdef>char** <parameter>state</parameter></paramdef>
+                                <paramdef>char **<parameter>state</parameter></paramdef>
                         </funcprototype>
 
                         <funcprototype>
                                 <funcdef>int <function>sd_uid_is_on_seat</function></funcdef>
                                 <paramdef>uid_t <parameter>uid</parameter></paramdef>
                                 <paramdef>int <parameter>require_active</parameter></paramdef>
-                                <paramdef>const char* <parameter>seat</parameter></paramdef>
+                                <paramdef>const char *<parameter>seat</parameter></paramdef>
                         </funcprototype>
 
                         <funcprototype>
                                 <funcdef>int <function>sd_uid_get_sessions</function></funcdef>
                                 <paramdef>uid_t <parameter>uid</parameter></paramdef>
                                 <paramdef>int <parameter>require_active</parameter></paramdef>
-                                <paramdef>char*** <parameter>sessions</parameter></paramdef>
+                                <paramdef>char ***<parameter>sessions</parameter></paramdef>
                         </funcprototype>
 
                         <funcprototype>
                                 <funcdef>int <function>sd_uid_get_seats</function></funcdef>
                                 <paramdef>uid_t <parameter>uid</parameter></paramdef>
                                 <paramdef>int <parameter>require_active</parameter></paramdef>
-                                <paramdef>char*** <parameter>seats</parameter></paramdef>
+                                <paramdef>char ***<parameter>seats</parameter></paramdef>
                         </funcprototype>
                 </funcsynopsis>
         </refsynopsisdiv>
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@
                 or active on a specific seat. Accepts a Unix user
                 identifier and a seat identifier string as
                 parameters. The <parameter>require_active</parameter>
-                parameter is a boolean value. If non-zero (true) this
+                parameter is a boolean value. If non-zero (true), this
                 function will test if the user is active (i.e. has a
                 session that is in the foreground and accepting user
                 input) on the specified seat, otherwise (false) only
@@ -133,13 +133,13 @@
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>free</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 call after use, including all the strings
                 referenced. If the string array parameter is passed as
-                <constant>NULL</constant> the array will not be filled in, but the return
+                <constant>NULL</constant>, the array will not be filled in, but the return
                 code still indicates the number of current
                 sessions. Note that instead of an empty array <constant>NULL</constant> may
                 be returned and should be considered equivalent to an
                 empty array.</para>
 
-                <para>Similar, <function>sd_uid_get_seats()</function>
+                <para>Similarly, <function>sd_uid_get_seats()</function>
                 may be used to determine the list of seats on which
                 the user currently has sessions. Similar semantics
                 apply, however note that the user may have
@@ -152,11 +152,11 @@
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Return Value</title>
 
-                <para>On success
+                <para>On success,
                 <function>sd_uid_get_state()</function> returns 0 or a
-                positive integer. If the test succeeds
+                positive integer. If the test succeeds,
                 <function>sd_uid_is_on_seat()</function> returns a
-                positive integer, if it fails
+                positive integer; if it fails,
                 0. <function>sd_uid_get_sessions()</function> and
                 <function>sd_uid_get_seats()</function> return the
                 number of entries in the returned arrays. On failure,
@@ -171,8 +171,8 @@
                 <function>sd_uid_is_on_seat()</function>,
                 <function>sd_uid_get_sessions()</function>, and
                 <function>sd_uid_get_seats()</function> interfaces are
-                available as shared library, which can be compiled and
-                linked to with the <constant>libsystemd-login</constant> <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
+                available as a shared library, which can be compiled and
+                linked to with the <constant>libsystemd</constant> <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 file.</para>
         </refsect1>