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diff --git a/man/pam_systemd.xml b/man/pam_systemd.xml
index 1d924bc31..0e25a4ac9 100644
--- a/man/pam_systemd.xml
+++ b/man/pam_systemd.xml
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
                 <title>Description</title>
 
                 <para><command>pam_systemd</command> registers user
-                sessions in the systemd login manager
+                sessions with the systemd login manager
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd-logind.service</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
                 and hence the systemd control group hierarchy.</para>
 
@@ -82,11 +82,11 @@
 
                         <listitem><para>A new systemd scope unit is
                         created for the session. If this is the first
-                        concurrent session of the user an implicit
+                        concurrent session of the user, an implicit
                         slice below <filename>user.slice</filename> is
                         automatically created and the scope placed in
                         it. In instance of the system service
-                        <filename>user@.service</filename> which runt
+                        <filename>user@.service</filename> which runs
                         the systemd user manager
                         instance.</para></listitem>
                 </orderedlist>
@@ -94,15 +94,15 @@
                 <para>On logout, this module ensures the following:</para>
 
                 <orderedlist>
-                        <listitem><para>If this is enabled all
+                        <listitem><para>If this is enabled, all
                         processes of the session are terminated. If
-                        the last concurrent session of a user ends his
+                        the last concurrent session of a user ends, his
                         user systemd instance will be terminated too,
                         and so will the user's slice
                         unit.</para></listitem>
 
-                        <listitem><para>If the las concurrent session
-                        of a user ends the
+                        <listitem><para>If the last concurrent session
+                        of a user ends, the
                         <varname>$XDG_RUNTIME_DIR</varname> directory
                         and all its contents are removed,
                         too.</para></listitem>