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diff --git a/man/daemon.xml b/man/daemon.xml
index 83143dc4b..258694080 100644
--- a/man/daemon.xml
+++ b/man/daemon.xml
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 
         <refnamediv>
                 <refname>daemon</refname>
-                <refpurpose>Writing and Packaging System Daemons</refpurpose>
+                <refpurpose>Writing and packaging system daemons</refpurpose>
         </refnamediv>
 
         <refsect1>
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@
                                 first child, so that only the second
                                 child (the actual daemon process)
                                 stays around. This ensures that the
-                                daemon process is reparented to
+                                daemon process is re-parented to
                                 init/PID 1, as all daemons should
                                 be.</para></listitem>
 
@@ -181,11 +181,11 @@
                                 <function>exit()</function> in the
                                 original process. The process that
                                 invoked the daemon must be able to
-                                rely that this
+                                rely on that this
                                 <function>exit()</function> happens
                                 after initialization is complete and
                                 all external communication channels
-                                established and
+                                are established and
                                 accessible.</para></listitem>
                         </orderedlist>
 
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@
                         compatibility with SysV systems should
                         implement the scheme pointed out
                         above. However, it is recommended to make this
-                        behaviour optional and configurable via a
+                        behavior optional and configurable via a
                         command line argument, to ease debugging as
                         well as to simplify integration into systems
                         using systemd.</para>
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@
                                 for details.</para></listitem>
 
                                 <listitem><para>As much as possible,
-                                rely on the init systemd's
+                                rely on the init system's
                                 functionality to limit the access of
                                 the daemon to files, services and
                                 other resources. i.e. in the case of
@@ -462,7 +462,7 @@
 
                         <para>New-style daemons which support socket
                         activation must be able to receive their
-                        sockets from the init system, instead of of
+                        sockets from the init system, instead of
                         creating and binding them themselves. For
                         details about the programming interfaces for
                         this scheme provided by systemd see
@@ -547,7 +547,7 @@
                         systemd, kernel devices appearing in the
                         sysfs/udev device tree can be exposed as units
                         if they are tagged with the string
-                        "<literal>systemd</literal>". Like any other
+                        <literal>systemd</literal>. Like any other
                         kind of unit they may then pull in other units
                         when activated (i.e. Plugged in) and thus
                         implement device-based activation. Systemd
@@ -740,7 +740,7 @@
                         directory returned by <command>pkg-config
                         systemd
                         --variable=systemdsystemunitdir</command> (for
-                        system services), resp. <command>pkg-config
+                        system services) or <command>pkg-config
                         systemd
                         --variable=systemduserunitdir</command>
                         (for user services). This will make the
@@ -894,7 +894,7 @@ fi</programlisting>
 
                         <listitem><para>If the daemon offers
                         interfaces to other software running on the
-                        local system via local AF_UNIX sockets,
+                        local system via local <constant>AF_UNIX</constant> sockets,
                         consider implementing socket-based activation
                         (see above). Usually a minimal patch is
                         sufficient to implement this: Extend the
@@ -905,8 +905,8 @@ fi</programlisting>
                         <function>sd_listen_fds()</function> returns a
                         positive value), skip the socket creation step
                         and use the passed sockets. Secondly, ensure
-                        that the file-system socket nodes for local
-                        AF_UNIX sockets used in the socket-based
+                        that the file system socket nodes for local
+                        <constant>AF_UNIX</constant> sockets used in the socket-based
                         activation are not removed when the daemon
                         shuts down, if sockets have been
                         passed. Third, if the daemon normally closes