man: wording and grammar updates

[elogind.git] / man / systemd-system.conf.xml

diff --git a/man/systemd-system.conf.xml b/man/systemd-system.conf.xml
index 48d02269cc404b6e54b6985f0e3528d19bf2338b..c52e59096ace7ec28f5668a8711ccef165fa1bd9 100644 (file)
--- a/man/systemd-system.conf.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-system.conf.xml
@@ -112,8 +112,8 @@
                                 addition to the
                                 <literal>name=systemd</literal> named
                                 hierarchy. Defaults to
-                                <literal>cpu</literal>. Takes a space
-                                separated list of controller
+                                <literal>cpu</literal>. Takes a
+                                space-separated list of controller
                                 names. Pass the empty string to ensure
                                 that systemd does not touch any
                                 hierarchies but its own.</para>
@@ -133,13 +133,13 @@
 
                                 <listitem><para>Configures controllers
                                 that shall be mounted in a single
-                                hierarchy. By default systemd will
+                                hierarchy. By default, systemd will
                                 mount all controllers which are
                                 enabled in the kernel in individual
                                 hierarchies, with the exception of
                                 those listed in this setting. Takes a
-                                space separated list of comma
-                                separated controller names, in order
+                                space-separated list of comma-separated
+                                controller names, in order
                                 to allow multiple joined
                                 hierarchies. Defaults to
                                 'cpu,cpuacct'. Pass an empty string to
@@ -150,11 +150,11 @@
                                 <para>Note that this option is only
                                 applied once, at very early boot. If
                                 you use an initial RAM disk (initrd)
-                                that uses systemd it might hence be
+                                that uses systemd, it might hence be
                                 necessary to rebuild the initrd if
                                 this option is changed, and make sure
                                 the new configuration file is included
-                                in it. Otherwise the initrd might
+                                in it. Otherwise, the initrd might
                                 mount the controller hierarchies in a
                                 different configuration than intended,
                                 and the main system cannot remount
@@ -175,7 +175,7 @@
                                 <literal>d</literal>,
                                 <literal>w</literal>). If
                                 <varname>RuntimeWatchdogSec=</varname>
-                                is set to a non-zero value the
+                                is set to a non-zero value, the
                                 watchdog hardware
                                 (<filename>/dev/watchdog</filename>)
                                 will be programmed to automatically
@@ -214,14 +214,13 @@
                                 capability bounding set for PID 1 and
                                 its children. See
                                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>capabilities</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry>
-                                for details. Takes a whitespace
-                                separated list of capability names as
-                                read by
+                                for details. Takes a whitespace-separated
+                                list of capability names as read by
                                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>cap_from_name</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>.
                                 Capabilities listed will be included
                                 in the bounding set, all others are
                                 removed. If the list of capabilities
-                                is prefixed with ~ all but the listed
+                                is prefixed with ~, all but the listed
                                 capabilities will be included, the
                                 effect of the assignment
                                 inverted. Note that this option also