man: improvements to comma placement

[elogind.git] / man / systemd.service.xml

diff --git a/man/systemd.service.xml b/man/systemd.service.xml
index 103c495fbed5dacc3bbbc338d0cd4a52b380a4d4..8e6c20550dbe49f7bfc0c9525e7c266b2c7e4698 100644 (file)
--- a/man/systemd.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.service.xml
@@ -321,11 +321,7 @@
                                 (these semicolons must be passed as
                                 separate words). Alternatively, this
                                 directive may be specified more than
                                 (these semicolons must be passed as
                                 separate words). Alternatively, this
                                 directive may be specified more than

-                                once with the same effect. However,
-                                the latter syntax is not recommended
-                                for compatibility with parsers
-                                suitable for XDG
-                                <filename>.desktop</filename> files.
+                                once with the same effect.

                                 Lone semicolons may be escaped as
                                 <literal>\;</literal>. If the empty
                                 string is assigned to this option, the
                                 Lone semicolons may be escaped as
                                 <literal>\;</literal>. If the empty
                                 string is assigned to this option, the


@@ -445,7 +441,7 @@
                                 <literal>one</literal> and
                                 <literal>two two</literal>,
                                 respectively. Since two commands are
                                 <literal>one</literal> and
                                 <literal>two two</literal>,
                                 respectively. Since two commands are

-                                specified
+                                specified,

                                 <varname>Type=oneshot</varname> must
                                 be used.</para>
 
                                 <varname>Type=oneshot</varname> must
                                 be used.</para>
 


@@ -716,7 +712,7 @@ ExecStart=/bin/echo $ONE $TWO ${TWO}
                                 timeout for the service expires.
                                 If set to
                                 <option>always</option>, the service
                                 timeout for the service expires.
                                 If set to
                                 <option>always</option>, the service

-                                will be restarted regardless whether
+                                will be restarted regardless of whether

                                 it exited cleanly or not, got
                                 terminated abnormally by a signal or
                                 hit a timeout.</para>
                                 it exited cleanly or not, got
                                 terminated abnormally by a signal or
                                 hit a timeout.</para>