From: Ian Jackson <ian@liberator.relativity.greenend.org.uk>
Date: Sun, 23 May 2010 16:46:52 +0000 (+0100)
Subject: More better doc
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More better doc
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@@ -111,13 +111,19 @@ and double-click on it.  It will either:
 
 <h3>Installing on Macs</h3>
 
-We believe that it should be straightforward for a MacOS developer or
-expert to get YARRG JPCTB working properly on MacOS but we have not
-been able to test this ourselves.  The Linux installation method is
-probably the best starting point.
+We believe that it should be straightforward for a MacOS expert to get
+YARRG JPCTB working properly on MacOS but we have not been able to
+test this ourselves.  The Linux installation method is probably the
+best starting point.
 
 <h2>How does it work?  Is it a violation of the Terms of Service?</h2>
 
+Essentially, JPCTB is a specialised "screen reader" which instead of
+reading information out loud, uploads it to the YARRG and PCTB
+databases.
+
+<p>
+
 YARRG JPCTB uses the Java Accessibility API, which is a part of the
 Java platform.  It's an interface provided for making applications
 available to users with disabilities, for example for hooking in
@@ -127,12 +133,6 @@ getting information out of Duty Reports).
 
 <p>
 
-Essentially, JPCTB is a specialised "screen reader" which instead of
-reading information out loud, uploads it to the YARRG and PCTB
-databases.
-
-<p>
-
 Installing YARRG JPCTB does not modify any game files, and does not
 hook into the game itself.  It makes no permanent or global changes to
 your overall computer, operating system or Java configuration.  And it