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diff --git a/pctb/README.privacy b/pctb/README.privacy
index 70cd93a..957f680 100644
--- a/pctb/README.privacy
+++ b/pctb/README.privacy
@@ -29,13 +29,17 @@ won't happen.
 2. YPP SC PCTB client dictionary server
 =======================================
 
-This server maintains the master database of character and island name
-images, which is used for the commodity screen OCR and also for
-determining your island name.
-
-By default, we ask the server for an updated set of dictionaries every
-time we run; this is done with the rsync protocol (indeed, by invoking
-rsync).  You can disable this with --dict-local-only.
+This server maintains the master copies of various databases which are
+used to assist the OCR process.  Collectively I call these
+`dictionaries'.  There is a dictionary of character and island name
+images, of new commodity names, and of notable known OCR
+misrecognitions.  These are used for the commodity screen OCR, for
+determining your island name, and for checking whether commodities not
+found on the PCTB server are real.
+
+By default, we ask the server for appropriate updated dictionaries
+every time we run; this is done with the rsync protocol (indeed, by
+invoking rsync).  You can disable this with --dict-local-only.
 
 If we find a screen display we don't understand, we will ask you about
 it by popping up a window which allows you to select the island (or
@@ -76,9 +80,9 @@ User interface for privacy
 The dictionary submission feature, and whether to quote your pirate
 identity, is exposed in and controllable from the dictionary update
 GUI, for maximum visibility.  The settings in the GUI are not recorded
-anywhere from one run to the next; instead the initial settings in the
-GUI come from the --dict-* privacy options.  See the table of options
-in the README for details.
+anywhere from one run to the next.  If you want to consistently
+increase your privacy setting, use the --dict-* privacy options.
+See the table of options in the README for details.
 
 Having said all that, please do not upload data to the PCTB server
 without also participating in dictionary sharing.  If you don't update