Nicer intro

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@@ -56,9 +56,9 @@ from YARRG.  It offers a variety of enquiry options.
 
 <p>
 
-This website documentation page contains information about the
-database website which you may not be able to divine from the online
-user interface.
+Hopefully you will be able to work it without too much help, but this
+documentation page contains information about the database website
+which you may not be able to divine from the online user interface.
 
 <h2>Bookmarkable URLs</h2>
 
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ The system understands the units t (tonnes), kg, l and kl
 (kilolitres).  There should be a space between the two limits, and no
 space before the unit.
 
-<h3>Estimated loss per league</h3>
+<h3>Expected losses</h3>
 
 In theory if you were guaranteed to have a trouble-free voyage it
 would be worth trading goods at very low margins.  However, in
@@ -150,6 +150,7 @@ every ten 10-league voyages.
 <p>
 
 You can enter the value in the box either as a percentage, or as a
-fraction 1/<em>divisor</em>, eg 1/200 is the same as 0.5%.
+fraction 1/<em>divisor</em>, eg 1/200 is the same as 0.5%; in each
+case it is taken as the loss for each league of the voyage.
 
 <& footer &>