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diff --git a/pctb/README.privacy b/pctb/README.privacy
index aa98ae8..70cd93a 100644
--- a/pctb/README.privacy
+++ b/pctb/README.privacy
@@ -91,15 +91,15 @@ Records kept
 ------------
 
 I keep a permanent log of all the submissions, including date, time,
-submitting pirate or IP address, and YPP SC PCTB client version..
-This is so that I have enough information to go back and fix things if
-anything goes badly wrong (for example, if a particular client is
-broken).
+submitting pirate or IP address, and YPP SC PCTB client version.
+This is so that I have enough information to go back and fix the
+dictionary if anything goes badly wrong (for example, if a particular
+client is broken).
 
-My system probably also records your IP address when your client
-fetches new master dictionaries; those logs are used only for
+My rsync server (file server) also records your IP address when your
+client fetches new master dictionaries; those logs are used only for
 debugging the rsync server (which also serves many other files), and
-they are routinely expired.
+they are routinely expired, currently after about two months.
 
 The information about the source of a submissions doesn't appear in
 the dictionaries as available for download, so other people won't