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diff --git a/pctb/README.privacy b/pctb/README.privacy
index aa98ae8..a59a2ad 100644
--- a/pctb/README.privacy
+++ b/pctb/README.privacy
@@ -76,9 +76,9 @@ User interface for privacy
 The dictionary submission feature, and whether to quote your pirate
 identity, is exposed in and controllable from the dictionary update
 GUI, for maximum visibility.  The settings in the GUI are not recorded
-anywhere from one run to the next; instead the initial settings in the
-GUI come from the --dict-* privacy options.  See the table of options
-in the README for details.
+anywhere from one run to the next.  If you want to consistently
+increase your privacy setting, use the --dict-* privacy options.
+See the table of options in the README for details.
 
 Having said all that, please do not upload data to the PCTB server
 without also participating in dictionary sharing.  If you don't update
@@ -91,15 +91,15 @@ Records kept
 ------------
 
 I keep a permanent log of all the submissions, including date, time,
-submitting pirate or IP address, and YPP SC PCTB client version..
-This is so that I have enough information to go back and fix things if
-anything goes badly wrong (for example, if a particular client is
-broken).
+submitting pirate or IP address, and YPP SC PCTB client version.
+This is so that I have enough information to go back and fix the
+dictionary if anything goes badly wrong (for example, if a particular
+client is broken).
 
-My system probably also records your IP address when your client
-fetches new master dictionaries; those logs are used only for
+My rsync server (file server) also records your IP address when your
+client fetches new master dictionaries; those logs are used only for
 debugging the rsync server (which also serves many other files), and
-they are routinely expired.
+they are routinely expired, currently after about two months.
 
 The information about the source of a submissions doesn't appear in
 the dictionaries as available for download, so other people won't