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[ypp-sc-tools.web-live.git] / yarrg / web / upload

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@@ -60,25 +60,27 @@ replace both the <a href="scraper">"yarrg"</a> and "PPAOCR" screenscrapers.
 First you must install YARRG JPCTB, following the instructions for
 your operating system, below.  This will not modify your Puzzle
 Pirates installation.  Instead, it provides you with a new way to run
 First you must install YARRG JPCTB, following the instructions for
 your operating system, below.  This will not modify your Puzzle
 Pirates installation.  Instead, it provides you with a new way to run

-Puzzle Pirates which has an additional YARRG/PCTB Upload function.
+Puzzle Pirates which integrates it with JPCTB to provides a YARRG/PCTB
+Upload facility.

 
 <p>
 
 To upload data, run the Puzzle Pirates client with JPCTB (as detailed
 
 <p>
 
 To upload data, run the Puzzle Pirates client with JPCTB (as detailed

-below), log in normally, and visit a commodity trading screen (at a
-market, shoppe or vessel hold).  Select "All Commodities", and hit
-"Upload".
+below).  You should see both the Puzzle Pirates window and the JPCTB
+window appear.  Log in normally, and visit a commodity trading screen
+(at a market, shoppe or vessel hold).  Select "All Commodities" in the
+YPP client.  Then press "Upload" in the JPCTB window.

 
 <p>
 
 The JPCTB integration is done via fully supported Java Accessibility
 interfaces and without modifying the Puzzle Pirates client, and should
 not disturb the normal running of Puzzle Pirates.  However, please
 
 <p>
 
 The JPCTB integration is done via fully supported Java Accessibility
 interfaces and without modifying the Puzzle Pirates client, and should
 not disturb the normal running of Puzzle Pirates.  However, please

-make sure that if your YPP client misbehaves in any way, you try
-running it in the vanilla way without JPCTB integration before asking
-for help.  In particular, if the JPCTB startup method does not work,
-but the vanilla client startup method does, report the problem to us,
-not to Three Rings.
+make sure that if your YPP client misbehaves at all, you try running
+it in the vanilla way (without JPCTB integration) before asking for
+help.  In particular, if the JPCTB startup does not work, but the
+ordinary Puzzle Pirates startup does, report the problem to us, not to
+Three Rings.

 
 <h3>Installing and running on Linux</h3>
 
 
 <h3>Installing and running on Linux</h3>