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diff --git a/stump/etc/messages/mistake.IN1 b/stump/etc/messages/mistake.IN1
index 82b908d..4e23e08 100644
--- a/stump/etc/messages/mistake.IN1
+++ b/stump/etc/messages/mistake.IN1
@@ -1,22 +1,12 @@
-Thank you for your message.  However, we have not approved it because
-it appears to have been posted in error.
+The post that you submitted to %GROUP% has been rejected by a
+moderator. 
 
-Reasons for us thinking a posting was made in error often include:
-  - It didn't contain any new text;
-  - It appears to have been truncated or mangled;
-  - It looks like it was sent before it was finished;
-  - It looks like it was meant to be sent by private email;
-  - It looks like it was meant for a different newsgroup.
+The moderator assumes that you posted this by mistake. It may be that
+it quotes a previous post without adding your own comment, or the text
+you have added may appear incomplete. We hope you will review and then
+re-submit your message.
 
-If this decision was wrong please let us know, preferably before
-resubmitting your message.  If the decision was right then we thank
-you for your submission and would encourage you to fix whatever the
-problem is and resubmit it, as applicable.
-
-You can find the group charter and moderation policy at:
+The group charter and moderation policy can be found at
   %GROUPURL%
-Please direct your queries to:
-  %MODEMAIL%
-
-Thank you,
-	- Moderator.
+Disputed moderation decisions can be discussed in the newsgroup
+  uk.net.news.moderation