X-Git-Url: http://www.chiark.greenend.org.uk/ucgi/~nmamery/git?a=blobdiff_plain;f=The_Golden_Circle.mdwn;h=cc85d2c650ded38b3db63c34aec5fe071c169f91;hb=400398c4d2a8cb6616b299520b9a0480c167c751;hp=42933065dcc786aa8d5de845b5884e8470d841a2;hpb=d17fc820017f0c4aa5b94b8f04f91ee63abcbf1f;p=PlayersGuide.git

diff --git a/The_Golden_Circle.mdwn b/The_Golden_Circle.mdwn
index 4293306..cc85d2c 100644
--- a/The_Golden_Circle.mdwn
+++ b/The_Golden_Circle.mdwn
@@ -3,20 +3,23 @@
 ----
 
 *Queen Moire is dead, and Queen Meinwen (Martin's daughter) is to be crowned Queen of Rebma. You have been looking forward to the coronation for weeks - it will be the social event of the decade, and everyone who is anyone will be there.*<br />
+<br />
 *Except, it seems, you.*<br />
-*Instead, you are being sent off on an errand that isn't important enough for anyone more senior to be saddled with...*
+<br />
+*Instead of attending the coronation, you are being sent off on an errand that isn't important enough for anyone more senior to be saddled with...*
 
 ----
 
 #### Basic Information ####
-* All the books are loosely canonical.
+* Welcome to The Golden Circle, run by Senji and Shadow. 
+* All the books are considered to be loosely canonical.
 * All characters should be people who would be invited to the coronation of Queen Meinwen of Rebma. 
+* The game will mainly be set within the Golden Circle.
 * The characters will be divided into two teams, and there will be competition between those teams.
 * Characters **must** be created before the con. 
-* The sooner you can send us your choice of grandparent and trump image, the better. 
+* The sooner you can send us your choice of grandparent and a trump image for your character, the better. 
 
 #### Details ####
 * [[Character Creation]]
 * [[Teams]]
-* Placeholder
-
+* Other