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-**Ally in the Golden Circle (1)**
-
-: A good friend among the "mundane" folk of either Amber or another
-Golden Circle city.
-
-: Please specify details about your Ally; which will need to be
-approved.
-
 **Friend in Low Places (1)**
 
-: A good friend among one of the "mundane" folk of Chaos who is in the
-area for some reason.  
-
-: Please specify approximately what kind of person; and we will do our
-best. 
-
-**Court Friend in either Amber or Chaos (2)**
-
-: A high ranking Amberite or Chaosian has your interests at heart.
-
-: You don't get to specify who, and probably won't find out.
+: One of the city's denizens who is regularly on the wrong side of the law owes you, big time. 
 
-**House Support (3)**
+:  If there's a particular kind of criminal you'd like this to be, let me know and I'll do my best. They are likely to offer tips, pass on information, etc.
 
-: One of the houses of Chaos supports your character.
+**Friend at Court (3)**
 
-: This may or may not be of any use, you don't get to specify who, and
-probably won't find out.
+: A high ranking Chaosian has an interest in you.
 
-**Amber Court Devotee (6)**
+: You don't get to specify who, and may not find out, but someone is looking out for your interests.
 
-: Someone in Amber really really likes you.
+**House Support (5)**
 
-: Fear.
+: One of the Houses of Chaos supports your character.
 
-: As an added benefit for someone without defined Amberite ancestry
-this gets you Amberite ancestry.  
+: This might be your own House, or another; either way, you have access to resources that others don't, and people who can help out if you're in a sticky situation.
 
-: You don't get to specify who, and probably won't find out.