From: ijackson <ijackson>
Date: Tue, 22 Jun 1999 02:28:40 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: More cosmetic improvements.
X-Git-Url: http://www.chiark.greenend.org.uk/ucgi/~ijackson/git?a=commitdiff_plain;h=202028048dd196649f227f52b531e21f2b56f6a1;p=bcp5-registry.git

More cosmetic improvements.
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diff --git a/template.html b/template.html
index 43ac7d0..30b1760 100644
--- a/template.html
+++ b/template.html
@@ -111,22 +111,18 @@ An error has occurred
 
 <h2>Introduction</h2>
 
-<A href="http://src.doc.ic.ac.uk/rfc/bcp/bcp5.txt">BCP5</a> (currently
-RFC1918, `Address Allocation for Private Internets') describes
-circumstances where it can be useful to have non-globally-unique IP
-addresses, and specifies three address IPv4 address ranges which can
-be used for this purpose.
+<a href="http://src.doc.ic.ac.uk/rfc/bcp/bcp5.txt">BCP5</a> (currently
+<a href="http://src.doc.ic.ac.uk/rfc/rfc1918.txt">RFC1918</a>,
+`Address Allocation for Private Internets') describes circumstances
+where it can be useful to have non-globally-unique IP addresses, and
+specifies three IPv4 address ranges which may be used for this
+purpose.  RFC1918 recommends that, to minimise the risk of clashes
+when private internets need to be merged, address ranges should be
+chosen at random.
 
 <p>
 
-<A href="http://src.doc.ic.ac.uk/rfc/rfc1918.txt">RFC1918</A>
-recommends that, to minimise the risk of clashes when private
-internets need to be merged, address ranges should be chosen at
-random.
-
-<p>
-
-This web page and database exists to help people choose ranges at
+This web page and database exist to help people choose ranges at
 random, and to help them choose ranges which are not currently in use
 by anyone else.
 
@@ -209,24 +205,24 @@ The name, contact or email address you specified contains illegal character(s).
 
 <form method="POST" action="@@@cgi@@@">
 
-with prefix length
+Choose network size:
 <br>
-<input type=radio name="specsize" value="28" @@@pick28check@@@> 28 bits
- (an 4 bit subnet, with 14 hosts)
+<input type=radio name="specsize" value="28" @@@pick28check@@@>
+ 28 bit prefix (4 bit subnet, up to 14 hosts)
 <br>
-<input type=radio name="specsize" value="24" @@@pick24check@@@> 24 bits
- (an 8 bit subnet, with 254 hosts) - <em>recommended</em>
+<input type=radio name="specsize" value="24" @@@pick24check@@@>
+ 24 bit prefix (8 bit subnet, up to 254 hosts)
 <br>
 <input type=radio name="specsize" value="prefix" @@@pickvarprefixcheck@@@>
- <input type=text name="pickvarprefix" size="24"
-  value="@@@pickvarprefix@@@" size="5"> bits.
+ <input type=text name="pickvarprefix" value="@@@pickvarprefix@@@" size="5">
+ bit prefix.
 <br>
 <input type=radio name="specsize" value="subnet" @@@pickvarsubnetcheck@@@>
- <input type=text name="pickvarsubnet" size="8"
- value="@@@pickvarsubnet@@@" size="5"> bit subnet.
+ <input type=text name="pickvarsubnet" value="@@@pickvarsubnet@@@" size="5">
+ bit subnet.
 <p>
 
-from the private-use range
+From which private-use range ?
 
 @@@foreach:area@@@
 
@@ -276,7 +272,9 @@ register it in our database.
 You must enter an email address to `own' the database entry.  This
 email address will be mailed a reminder asking you to confirm/renew
 your entry periodically, and will also be used to authorise changes to
-the entry.
+the entry.  It will be published on these pages unless you select to
+hide it; apart from that we will only use it to contact you about your
+database entry.
 @@@endif:@@@
 
 @@@if:details|fulldetails@@@