From: Conrad Meyer Date: Wed, 7 Jul 2010 01:24:38 +0000 (-0700) Subject: man: minor edits to daemon, sd_listen_fds, sd_notify, systemctl, systemd.exec, system... X-Git-Tag: v1~8 X-Git-Url: http://www.chiark.greenend.org.uk/ucgi/~ianmdlvl/git?p=elogind.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=ad678a066b4ba5d8914dd7d5a4093572841205cf man: minor edits to daemon, sd_listen_fds, sd_notify, systemctl, systemd.exec, systemd, and systemd.timer pages Just some minor grammar fixes. --- diff --git a/man/daemon.xml b/man/daemon.xml index 8e9e93953..dfee39016 100644 --- a/man/daemon.xml +++ b/man/daemon.xml @@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ communication channels are established already, and no request is lost because client requests will be queued by the bus system (in case of D-Bus) or the kernel (in - case of sockets), until the activation + case of sockets), until the activation is completed. @@ -726,7 +726,7 @@ install their systemd unit files in the directory returned by pkg-config systemd - --variable=systemdsystemnunitdir + --variable=systemdsystemunitdir (for system services), resp. pkg-config systemd --variable=systemdsessionunitdir @@ -809,8 +809,8 @@ fi Since new-style init systems such as systemd are compatible with traditional SysV init systems it is not strictly necessary to port existing daemons to the - new style. However doing this offers additional - functionality to the daemons as well as it simplifies + new style. However doing so offers additional + functionality to the daemons as well as simplifying integration into new-style init systems. To port an existing SysV compatible daemon the @@ -849,7 +849,7 @@ fi left-over file descriptors are passed to executed processes, it might be a good choice to simply skip the closing of all remaining - open file descriptors if file descriptors are + open file descriptors if sockets are passed. Write and install a systemd diff --git a/man/sd_listen_fds.xml b/man/sd_listen_fds.xml index 06403ecaa..6fb8d27f2 100644 --- a/man/sd_listen_fds.xml +++ b/man/sd_listen_fds.xml @@ -109,8 +109,8 @@ On failure, this call returns a negative errno-style error code. If $LISTEN_FDS/$LISTEN_PID - was not set or not correctly set for this daemon and - hence no file descriptors received, 0 is + was not set or was not correctly set for this daemon and + hence no file descriptors were received, 0 is returned. Otherwise the number of file descriptors passed is returned. The application may find them starting with file descriptor SD_LISTEN_FDS_START, diff --git a/man/sd_notify.xml b/man/sd_notify.xml index 80856a22d..7c1d982d8 100644 --- a/man/sd_notify.xml +++ b/man/sd_notify.xml @@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ Start-up Notification When a daemon finished starting up, it - might issue the following call call to notify + might issue the following call to notify the init system: sd_notify(0, "READY=1"); diff --git a/man/systemctl.xml b/man/systemctl.xml index c0b8d7927..a7065f98a 100644 --- a/man/systemctl.xml +++ b/man/systemctl.xml @@ -381,7 +381,7 @@ unit files and recreate the entire dependency tree. While the daemon is reloaded, all sockets systemd listens - on on behalf of user configuration, will + on on behalf of user configuration will stay accessible. This command should not be confused with the load or diff --git a/man/systemd.exec.xml b/man/systemd.exec.xml index 68495dcaf..a47a62dae 100644 --- a/man/systemd.exec.xml +++ b/man/systemd.exec.xml @@ -374,13 +374,13 @@ . - StandardOutput= + StandardError= Controls where file descriptor 2 (STDERR) of the executed processes is connected to. The available options are identical to those of - StandardError=, + StandardOutput=, whith one exception: if set to the file descriptor used for standard output is @@ -617,7 +617,7 @@ Controls the control groups the executed processes shall be - made member of. Takes a + made members of. Takes a space-seperated list of cgroup identifiers. A cgroup identifier has a format like diff --git a/man/systemd.timer.xml b/man/systemd.timer.xml index 518ae2a9f..9b6b486bf 100644 --- a/man/systemd.timer.xml +++ b/man/systemd.timer.xml @@ -170,10 +170,10 @@ specified, this value defaults to a service that has the same name as the timer unit, except for the - suffix. (See above.) It is recommended, + suffix. (See above.) It is recommended that the unit name that is activated and the unit name of the timer unit - are named identical, except for the + are named identically, except for the suffix. diff --git a/man/systemd.xml b/man/systemd.xml index ba775c5c9..4f4a588a9 100644 --- a/man/systemd.xml +++ b/man/systemd.xml @@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ Extract D-Bus interface introspection data. This is - mostly useful at build at install time + mostly useful at install time to generate data suitable for the D-Bus interfaces repository. Optionally the interface