From: Jan Engelhardt Date: Sat, 3 May 2014 17:15:24 +0000 (+0200) Subject: doc: typographical fine tuning X-Git-Tag: v213~233 X-Git-Url: http://www.chiark.greenend.org.uk/ucgi/~ianmdlvl/git?p=elogind.git;a=commitdiff_plain;h=70a44afee385c4afadaab9a002b3f9dd44aedf4a doc: typographical fine tuning --- diff --git a/NEWS b/NEWS index 5ca6c0347..ac2cf4130 100644 --- a/NEWS +++ b/NEWS @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 212: on a partition to ignore it during automatic discovery. * Two new GPT type UUIDs have been added for automatic root - partition discovery, for 32bit and 64bit ARM. This is not + partition discovery, for 32-bit and 64-bit ARM. This is not particularly useful for discovering the root directory on these architectures during bare-metal boots (since UEFI is not common there), but still very useful to allow booting of @@ -769,7 +769,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 209: * systemd-nspawn gained a new --personality= switch for setting the kernel personality for the container. This is - useful when running a 32bit container on a 64bit host. A + useful when running a 32-bit container on a 64-bit host. A similar option Personality= is now also available in service units. diff --git a/README b/README index 795db89a7..ef8c6201f 100644 --- a/README +++ b/README @@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ REQUIREMENTS: If systemd is compiled with libseccomp support on architectures which do not use socketcall() and where seccomp is supported (this effectively means x86-64 and ARM, but - excludes 32bit x86!), then nspawn will now install a + excludes 32-bit x86!), then nspawn will now install a work-around seccomp filter that makes containers boot even with audit being enabled. This works correctly only on kernels 3.14 and newer though. TL;DR: turn audit off, still. diff --git a/TODO b/TODO index 7fcb511fb..db59984bf 100644 --- a/TODO +++ b/TODO @@ -575,7 +575,7 @@ Features: * support crash reporting operation modes (https://live.gnome.org/GnomeOS/Design/Whiteboards/ProblemReporting) -* default to actual 32bit PIDs, via /proc/sys/kernel/pid_max +* default to actual 32-bit PIDs, via /proc/sys/kernel/pid_max * be able to specify a forced restart of service A where service B depends on, in case B needs to be auto-respawned? diff --git a/man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml b/man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml index 2cc720f24..7cb8e77bc 100644 --- a/man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml +++ b/man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml @@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see . reversed with sd_bus_decode(). It is recommended to only use external identifiers here that generally require little escaping to be turned into valid bus path - identifiers (for example by sticking to a 7bit ASCII character + identifiers (for example by sticking to a 7-bit ASCII character set), in order to ensure the resulting bus path is still short and easily processed. diff --git a/man/systemd-gpt-auto-generator.xml b/man/systemd-gpt-auto-generator.xml index db98582b7..32e118333 100644 --- a/man/systemd-gpt-auto-generator.xml +++ b/man/systemd-gpt-auto-generator.xml @@ -106,22 +106,22 @@ 44479540-f297-41b2-9af7-d131d5f0458a Root Partition (x86) - On 32bit x86 systems the first x86 root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory /. + On 32-bit x86 systems the first x86 root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory /. 4f68bce3-e8cd-4db1-96e7-fbcaf984b709 Root Partition (x86-64) - On 64bit x86 systems the first x86-64 root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory /. + On 64-bit x86 systems the first x86-64 root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory /. 69dad710-2ce4-4e3c-b16c-21a1d49abed3 - Root Partition (32bit ARM) - On 32bit ARM systems the first ARM root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory /. + Root Partition (32-bit ARM) + On 32-bit ARM systems the first ARM root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory /. b921b045-1df0-41c3-af44-4c6f280d3fae - Root Partition (64bit ARM) - On 64bit ARM systems the first ARM root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory /. + Root Partition (64-bit ARM) + On 64-bit ARM systems the first ARM root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory /. 933ac7e1-2eb4-4f13-b844-0e14e2aef915 diff --git a/man/systemd-networkd.service.xml b/man/systemd-networkd.service.xml index 85fa2a4be..75ea1a4b4 100644 --- a/man/systemd-networkd.service.xml +++ b/man/systemd-networkd.service.xml @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ Network configurations applied before networkd is started are not removed, and static configuration applied by networkd is not removed when networkd exits. Dynamic configuration applied by - networkd may also optionally be left in place on shut-down. This ensures + networkd may also optionally be left in place on shutdown. This ensures restarting networkd does not cut the network connection, and, in particular, that it is safe to transition between the initrd and the real root, and back. diff --git a/man/systemd-nspawn.xml b/man/systemd-nspawn.xml index 648a8cd19..18946167c 100644 --- a/man/systemd-nspawn.xml +++ b/man/systemd-nspawn.xml @@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ After transitioning into the container, change to the - specified user defined in the + specified user-defined in the container's user database. Like all other systemd-nspawn features, this is not a security feature and provides @@ -600,7 +600,7 @@ x86 and x86-64 are supported. This is useful when running - a 32bit container on a 64bit + a 32-bit container on a 64-bit host. If this setting is not used the personality reported in the container is the same as the one diff --git a/man/systemd-update-utmp.service.xml b/man/systemd-update-utmp.service.xml index 846fc959d..0b316b1ac 100644 --- a/man/systemd-update-utmp.service.xml +++ b/man/systemd-update-utmp.service.xml @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ is a service that writes SysV runlevel changes to utmp and wtmp, as well as the audit logs, as they occur. systemd-update-utmp.service - does the same for system reboots and shut-down requests. + does the same for system reboots and shutdown requests. diff --git a/man/systemd.exec.xml b/man/systemd.exec.xml index 5d39bd1a1..d206d4f64 100644 --- a/man/systemd.exec.xml +++ b/man/systemd.exec.xml @@ -1204,7 +1204,7 @@ (which creates connected AF_UNIX sockets only) are unaffected. Note that this option has no effect on - 32bit x86 and is ignored (but works + 32-bit x86 and is ignored (but works correctly on x86-64). If running in user mode and this option is used, NoNewPrivileges=yes @@ -1239,8 +1239,8 @@ processes. Takes one of x86 and x86-64. This is - useful when running 32bit services on - a 64bit host system. If not specified + useful when running 32-bit services on + a 64-bit host system. If not specified the personality is left unmodified and thus reflects the personality of the host system's diff --git a/man/systemd.link.xml b/man/systemd.link.xml index 3ad006e95..2f5de2374 100644 --- a/man/systemd.link.xml +++ b/man/systemd.link.xml @@ -236,8 +236,8 @@ The name is set based on entries in the udev's Hardware Database with the key - ID_NET_NAME_FROM_DATABASE - . + ID_NET_NAME_FROM_DATABASE. + @@ -245,8 +245,8 @@ The name is set based on information given by the firmware for on-board devices, as exported by - the udev property ID_NET_NAME_ONBOARD - . + the udev property ID_NET_NAME_ONBOARD. + @@ -254,8 +254,8 @@ The name is set based on information given by the firmware for hot-plug devices, as exported by - the udev property ID_NET_NAME_SLOT - . + the udev property ID_NET_NAME_SLOT. + @@ -329,7 +329,7 @@ magic - Wake on receipt of a magic packet + Wake on receipt of a magic packet. diff --git a/man/systemd.network.xml b/man/systemd.network.xml index 48e33ac4d..c4e5055d9 100644 --- a/man/systemd.network.xml +++ b/man/systemd.network.xml @@ -272,8 +272,8 @@ Broadcast= The broadcast address, which must be in the format described in - inet_pton3 - . This key only applies to IPv4 addresses. If it is not given, it is + inet_pton3. + This key only applies to IPv4 addresses. If it is not given, it is derived from the Address key.