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man: minor fixes
authorLennart Poettering <lennart@poettering.net>
Wed, 20 Apr 2011 23:18:23 +0000 (01:18 +0200)
committerLennart Poettering <lennart@poettering.net>
Wed, 20 Apr 2011 23:18:23 +0000 (01:18 +0200)
man/machine-id.xml
man/os-release.xml

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@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
                 random source during system installation and stays
                 constant for all subsequent boots. Optionally, for
                 stateless systems it is generated during runtime at
-                boot.</para>
+                boot if it is found to be empty.</para>
 
                 <para>The machine ID does not change based on user
                 configuration, or when hardware is replaced.</para>
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                         </varlistentry>
                 </variablelist>
 
-                <para>If you interpreting this file from code or a
-                shell script, use the ID and VERSION_ID fields. When
-                looking for an OS identification string for
-                presentation to the user use the PRETTY_STRING
-                field.</para>
+                <para>If you are reading this file from code or a
+                shell script to determine the OS or a specific version
+                of it, use the ID and VERSION_ID fields. When looking
+                for an OS identification string for presentation to
+                the user use the PRETTY_NAME field.</para>
 
                 <para>Note that operating system vendors may choose
                 not to provide version information, for example to