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diff --git a/man/systemd.mount.xml b/man/systemd.mount.xml
index 7be7d4938..323f23287 100644
--- a/man/systemd.mount.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.mount.xml
@@ -69,7 +69,10 @@
                 in the [Mount] section.</para>
 
                 <para>Additional options are listed in
-                <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.exec</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
+                <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.exec</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
+                which define the execution environment the
+                <citerefentry><refentrytitle>mount</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>
+                binary is executed in.</para>
 
                 <para>Mount units must be named after the mount point
                 directories they control. Example: the mount point
@@ -86,7 +89,7 @@
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.automount</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
 
                 <para>If an mount point is beneath another mount point
-                in the file system hierarchy a dependency between both
+                in the file system hierarchy, a dependency between both
                 units is created automatically.</para>
 
                 <para>Mount points created at runtime independent on
@@ -108,7 +111,7 @@
                 which influence how dependencies are created for mount
                 points from <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>. If
                 <option>comment=systemd.mount</option> is specified as
-                mount option then systemd will create a dependency of
+                mount option, then systemd will create a dependency of
                 type <option>Wants</option> from either
                 <filename>local-fs.target</filename> or
                 <filename>remote-fs.target</filename>, depending
@@ -119,7 +122,7 @@
                 for details.</para>
 
                 <para>If a mount point is configured in both
-                <filename>/etc/fstab</filename> and a unit file the
+                <filename>/etc/fstab</filename> and a unit file, the
                 configuration in the latter takes precedence.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -144,7 +147,7 @@
                                 resource to mount. See
                                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>mount</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                                 for details. If this refers to a
-                                device node a dependency on the
+                                device node, a dependency on the
                                 respective device unit is
                                 automatically created. (See
                                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.device</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry> for more information.)
@@ -157,7 +160,7 @@
                                 <listitem><para>Takes an absolute path
                                 of a directory of the mount point. If
                                 the mount point is not existing at
-                                time of mounting it is created. This
+                                time of mounting, it is created. This
                                 string must be reflected in the unit
                                 file name. (See above.) This option is
                                 mandatory.</para></listitem>
@@ -177,7 +180,7 @@
 
                                 <listitem><para>Mount options to use
                                 when mounting. This takes a comma
-                                seperated list of options. This
+                                separated list of options. This
                                 setting is optional.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
@@ -188,7 +191,8 @@
                                 are automatically created if
                                 needed. This option specifies the file
                                 system access mode used when creating
-                                these directories. Defaults to
+                                these directories. Takes an access
+                                mode in octal notation. Defaults to
                                 0755.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
@@ -196,7 +200,7 @@
                                 <term><varname>TimeoutSec=</varname></term>
                                 <listitem><para>Configures the time to
                                 wait for the mount command to
-                                finish. If a comand does not exit
+                                finish. If a command does not exit
                                 within the configured time the mount
                                 will be considered failed and be shut
                                 down again. All commands still running
@@ -233,7 +237,7 @@
         <refsect1>
                   <title>See Also</title>
                   <para>
-                          <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
+                          <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
                           <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemctl</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
                           <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.unit</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
                           <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.exec</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>,