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diff --git a/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml b/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml
index 452406c67..c93b5da1d 100644
--- a/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml
@@ -51,14 +51,14 @@
                 <title>Description</title>
 
                 <para>Entries in the journal resemble an environment
-                block in their syntax, however with fields that can
+                block in their syntax but with fields that can
                 include binary data. Primarily, fields are formatted
                 UTF-8 text strings, and binary formatting is used only
                 where formatting as UTF-8 text strings makes little
                 sense. New fields may freely be defined by
                 applications, but a few fields have special
                 meaning. All fields with special meanings are
-                optional. In some cases fields may appear more than
+                optional. In some cases, fields may appear more than
                 once per entry.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@
                                 <term><varname>_UID=</varname></term>
                                 <term><varname>_GID=</varname></term>
                                 <listitem>
-                                        <para>The process, user and
+                                        <para>The process, user, and
                                         group ID of the process the
                                         journal entry originates from
                                         formatted as a decimal
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@
                                 <term><varname>_CMDLINE=</varname></term>
                                 <listitem>
                                         <para>The name, the executable
-                                        path and the command line of
+                                        path, and the command line of
                                         the process the journal entry
                                         originates from.</para>
                                 </listitem>
@@ -223,17 +223,20 @@
                                 <term><varname>_SYSTEMD_UNIT=</varname></term>
                                 <term><varname>_SYSTEMD_USER_UNIT=</varname></term>
                                 <term><varname>_SYSTEMD_OWNER_UID=</varname></term>
+                                <term><varname>_SYSTEMD_SLICE=</varname></term>
 
                                 <listitem>
-                                        <para>The control group path in
-                                        the systemd hierarchy, the
+                                        <para>The control group path
+                                        in the systemd hierarchy, the
                                         systemd session ID (if any),
-                                        the systemd unit name (if any),
-                                        the systemd user session unit name (if any)
-                                        and the owner UID of the
-                                        systemd session (if any) of
-                                        the process the journal entry
-                                        originates from.</para>
+                                        the systemd unit name (if
+                                        any), the systemd user session
+                                        unit name (if any), the owner
+                                        UID of the systemd session (if
+                                        any) and the systemd slice
+                                        unit of the process the
+                                        journal entry originates
+                                        from.</para>
                                 </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
@@ -241,8 +244,8 @@
                                 <term><varname>_SELINUX_CONTEXT=</varname></term>
                                 <listitem>
                                         <para>The SELinux security
-                                        context of the process the
-                                        journal entry originates
+                                        context (label) of the process
+                                        the journal entry originates
                                         from.</para>
                                 </listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
@@ -386,12 +389,12 @@
                                         the major and minor of the
                                         device node, separated by <literal>:</literal>
                                         and prefixed by <literal>b</literal>. Similar
-                                        for character devices, but
+                                        for character devices but
                                         prefixed by <literal>c</literal>. For network
-                                        devices the interface index,
+                                        devices, this is the interface index
                                         prefixed by <literal>n</literal>. For all other
-                                        devices <literal>+</literal> followed by the
-                                        subsystem name, followed by
+                                        devices, this is the subsystem name
+                                        prefixed by <literal>+</literal>, followed by
                                         <literal>:</literal>, followed by the kernel
                                         device name.</para>
                                 </listitem>
@@ -525,7 +528,7 @@
                 url="http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/systemd/json">Journal
                 JSON Format</ulink>, the addresses of journal entries
                 are serialized into fields prefixed with double
-                underscores. Note that these aren't proper fields when
+                underscores. Note that these are not proper fields when
                 stored in the journal but for addressing meta data of
                 entries. They cannot be written as part of structured
                 log entries via calls such as