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diff --git a/man/sd_notify.xml b/man/sd_notify.xml
index 1cd5b0aa7..55965ffce 100644
--- a/man/sd_notify.xml
+++ b/man/sd_notify.xml
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
         <refnamediv>
                 <refname>sd_notify</refname>
                 <refname>sd_notifyf</refname>
-                <refpurpose>Notify init system about start-up completion and other daemon status changes</refpurpose>
+                <refpurpose>Notify service manager about start-up completion and other daemon status changes</refpurpose>
         </refnamediv>
 
         <refsynopsisdiv>
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
                 notification.</para>
 
                 <para>If the <parameter>unset_environment</parameter>
-                parameter is non-zero <function>sd_notify()</function>
+                parameter is non-zero, <function>sd_notify()</function>
                 will unset the <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname>
                 environment variable before returning (regardless
                 whether the function call itself succeeded or
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
                 processes.</para>
 
                 <para>The <parameter>state</parameter> parameter
-                should contain an newline-separated list of variable
+                should contain a newline-separated list of variable
                 assignments, similar in style to an environment
                 block. A trailing newline is implied if none is
                 specified. The string may contain any kind of variable
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@
                                 definition file has Type=notify
                                 set. The passed argument is a boolean
                                 "1" or "0". Since there is little
-                                value in signalling non-readiness, the
+                                value in signaling non-readiness, the
                                 only value daemons should send is
                                 "READY=1".</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
@@ -197,10 +197,10 @@
                 errno-style error code. If
                 <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> was not set and
                 hence no status data could be sent, 0 is returned. If
-                the status was sent these functions return with a
+                the status was sent, these functions return with a
                 positive return value. In order to support both, init
                 systems that implement this scheme and those which
-                don't, it is generally recommended to ignore the return
+                do not, it is generally recommended to ignore the return
                 value of this call.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -217,18 +217,18 @@
 
                 <para>Internally, these functions send a single
                 datagram with the state string as payload to the
-                AF_UNIX socket referenced in the
+                <constant>AF_UNIX</constant> socket referenced in the
                 <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> environment
                 variable. If the first character of
-                <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> is @ the string is
+                <varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname> is <literal>@</literal>, the string is
                 understood as Linux abstract namespace socket. The
                 datagram is accompanied by the process credentials of
                 the sending daemon, using SCM_CREDENTIALS.</para>
 
                 <para>For details about the algorithms check the
                 liberally licensed reference implementation sources:
-                <ulink url="http://cgit.freedesktop.org/systemd/systemd/plain/src/sd-daemon.c"/>
-                resp. <ulink
+                <ulink url="http://cgit.freedesktop.org/systemd/systemd/plain/src/libsystemd-daemon/sd-daemon.c"/>
+                and <ulink
                 url="http://cgit.freedesktop.org/systemd/systemd/plain/src/systemd/sd-daemon.h"/></para>
 
                 <para><function>sd_notify()</function> and
@@ -238,8 +238,7 @@
                 <filename>sd-daemon.h</filename> files. These
                 interfaces are available as shared library, which can
                 be compiled and linked to with the
-                <literal>libsystemd-daemon</literal>
-                <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
+                <constant>libsystemd-daemon</constant> <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 file. Alternatively, applications consuming these APIs
                 may copy the implementation into their source tree. For
                 more details about the reference implementation see
@@ -247,14 +246,14 @@
 
                 <para>If the reference implementation is used as
                 drop-in files and -DDISABLE_SYSTEMD is set during
-                compilation these functions will always return 0 and
+                compilation, these functions will always return 0 and
                 otherwise become a NOP.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Environment</title>
 
-                <variablelist>
+                <variablelist class='environment-variables'>
                         <varlistentry>
                                 <term><varname>$NOTIFY_SOCKET</varname></term>