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diff --git a/man/sd_listen_fds.xml b/man/sd_listen_fds.xml
index 734e2374d..6fb8d27f2 100644
--- a/man/sd_listen_fds.xml
+++ b/man/sd_listen_fds.xml
@@ -96,8 +96,7 @@
                 for the service to work, hence it should not be
                 verified. On the other hand, whether a socket is a
                 datagram or stream socket matters a lot for the most
-                common program logics and should hence be
-                checked.</para>
+                common program logics and should be checked.</para>
 
                 <para>This function call will set the FD_CLOEXEC flag
                 for all passed file descriptors to avoid further
@@ -110,10 +109,10 @@
                 <para>On failure, this call returns a negative
                 errno-style error code. If
                 <varname>$LISTEN_FDS</varname>/<varname>$LISTEN_PID</varname>
-                was not set or not correctly set for this daemon and
-                hence no file descriptors received 0 is
+                was not set or was not correctly set for this daemon and
+                hence no file descriptors were received, 0 is
                 returned. Otherwise the number of file descriptors
-                passed is returned, the application may find them
+                passed is returned. The application may find them
                 starting with file descriptor SD_LISTEN_FDS_START,
                 i.e. file descriptor 3.</para>
         </refsect1>