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diff --git a/man/sd_journal_get_fd.xml b/man/sd_journal_get_fd.xml
index f3fbe69c3..764f716a1 100644
--- a/man/sd_journal_get_fd.xml
+++ b/man/sd_journal_get_fd.xml
@@ -137,8 +137,8 @@
                 <varname>timeout_usec</varname>. See
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>clock_gettime</refentrytitle><manvolnum>2</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 for details about
-                <constant>CLOCK_MONOTONIC</constant>. If there's no
-                timeout to wait for this will fill in
+                <constant>CLOCK_MONOTONIC</constant>. If there is no
+                timeout to wait for, this will fill in
                 <constant>(uint64_t) -1</constant> instead. Note that
                 <function>poll()</function> takes a relative timeout
                 in milliseconds rather than an absolute timeout in
@@ -232,15 +232,15 @@ else {
                 <constant>SD_JOURNAL_APPEND</constant> or
                 <constant>SD_JOURNAL_INVALIDATE</constant> on success or
                 a negative errno-style error code. If
-                <constant>SD_JOURNAL_NOP</constant> is returned the
-                journal didn't change since the last invocation. If
-                <constant>SD_JOURNAL_APPEND</constant> is returned new
+                <constant>SD_JOURNAL_NOP</constant> is returned, the
+                journal did not change since the last invocation. If
+                <constant>SD_JOURNAL_APPEND</constant> is returned, new
                 entries have been appended to the end of the
-                journal. If <constant>SD_JOURNAL_INVALIDATE</constant>
+                journal. If <constant>SD_JOURNAL_INVALIDATE</constant>,
                 journal files were added or removed (possibly due to
-                rotation). In the latter event live-view UIs should
-                probably refresh their entire display while in the
-                case of <constant>SD_JOURNAL_APPEND</constant> it is
+                rotation). In the latter event, live-view UIs should
+                probably refresh their entire display, while in the
+                case of <constant>SD_JOURNAL_APPEND</constant>, it is
                 sufficient to simply continue reading at the previous
                 end of the journal.</para>
         </refsect1>
@@ -255,8 +255,7 @@ else {
                 <function>sd_journal_wait()</function> interfaces are
                 available as shared library, which can be compiled and
                 linked to with the
-                <constant>libsystemd-journal</constant>
-                <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
+                <constant>libsystemd-journal</constant> <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
                 file.</para>
         </refsect1>